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Hello
Id write to you anyday
I've just been busy
I didn't have a lot of time to play
I've become quite content
My job going great
I'm loving the new challange
Leader of my phase
Heading towards the top
Im doing quite well
Second job also going swell
Computers and components
I teach at other schools
Music is lost
As the band deforms
Hopefully soon we start to defrost
Missing my jams
Husband and wife
We are declared precious
Such a team mate
We are really doing great
To the east of asia we will travel
For some fun, a holiday
An adventure to come
I wish you well
I wish you happiness
Goodbye my friend
I've just been busy
I didn't have a lot of time to play
I've become quite content
My job going great
I'm loving the new challange
Leader of my phase
Heading towards the top
Im doing quite well
Second job also going swell
Computers and components
I teach at other schools
Music is lost
As the band deforms
Hopefully soon we start to defrost
Missing my jams
Husband and wife
We are declared precious
Such a team mate
We are really doing great
To the east of asia we will travel
For some fun, a holiday
An adventure to come
I wish you well
I wish you happiness
Goodbye my friend
Published 25th Oct 2016
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20th Nov 2017 6:31pm
I really like how this reads as a letter to a pen pal.
it has self progression,possible sadness from the band breaking up or not practicing
and a family with a holiday coming up.
good poem lanapoet
for a positive critique i would say and an "s" or an "is" on the end of job in the second stanza.
it has self progression,possible sadness from the band breaking up or not practicing
and a family with a holiday coming up.
good poem lanapoet
for a positive critique i would say and an "s" or an "is" on the end of job in the second stanza.
