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hid in my yaps
who out there?
who among my narrow readers
can listen to my typing nail-taps
and truly know the hid
hid in my yaps?
who cares to know the flotsam
behind and below and beyonder?
what meanings come through
to my little friend to you?
are ya glad ya took the time
with me in brief to wander?
Published 24th Oct 2016
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25th Oct 2016 00:30am
Why yes, I am glad to have taken a drift through these words. I loved the way you spoke directly in your verses, seems more personal to your readers and it was definately worth the read.
Thank you for sharing, such an interesting point of view...
Thank you for sharing, such an interesting point of view...
25th Oct 2016 6:35am
your flotsam is my alluvials,
behind me & before me & yes, beyonder.
clever display of yaps...
behind me & before me & yes, beyonder.
clever display of yaps...
27th Oct 2016 4:10pm
this one lost me, but then it inspired me to read and research to get its meaning for me and that;s a good thimg :-)
