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My Evening Shelter
heavy
lies the head that bears this crown
as it slowly descends
the sleek and narrow stairway
Into your heaven
serenade my passage,love
with a reassuring hymn
let your harmonious pulsing massage
this drawn out symbol of angst
seething with intensity
yearning to lessen the density
of this burden I carry
I know
that within the hall of your cathedral
I shall find my solace
my refuge from THAT which goes bump
inside the asylum that is my mind
for your most basic nature
is to nurture
and as my torment is self evident
allow this sojourning soul
to share the warmth of your residence
if only for the moon's passing
render unto me the healing powers
of your feminine compassion
acquitting me of this nocturnal disquiet
as my midnight companion
hold firm sweetness
it is a turbulent thing I have for you
with each urgent thrust
I trust only in you to hold dear
and cradle the particles of
my fleeting essence
this outpouring of my being
continuous
~~~~~streaming~~~~~
until superimposed
at ease at last
within you
my evening shelter
Published 22nd Oct 2016
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Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
22nd Oct 2016 7:20am
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22nd Oct 2016 11:05am
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Anonymous
22nd Oct 2016 1:53pm
Oooooo Naajir........liking this read for an early morning thrill......very sexy and unique......enjoyed .......purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Oct 2016 2:46pm
Brilliant as always!
Your phrasing is just stunning, I especially liked these lines:
hold firm sweetness
it is a turbulent thing I have for you
Your phrasing is just stunning, I especially liked these lines:
hold firm sweetness
it is a turbulent thing I have for you
22nd Oct 2016 4:19pm
Couldn't have said it any better myself . . .
I mean I could never write so wonderful of
life's most favorite passion!
I mean I could never write so wonderful of
life's most favorite passion!
22nd Oct 2016 11:04pm
23rd Oct 2016 1:01pm
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2016 7:05pm
Nobody spreads imagery like you do, sir. Incredible...as always. :)
Willow
Willow
24th Oct 2016 7:01am
"I know
that within the hall of your cathedral
I shall find my solace
my refuge from THAT which goes bump
inside the asylum that is my mind
for your most basic nature
is to nurture
and as my torment is self evident
allow this sojourning soul
to share the warmth of your residence
if only for the moon's passing "<--- Dude, sometimes your ink has a way of peeling back my skin.
Intellectually stimulated~
that within the hall of your cathedral
I shall find my solace
my refuge from THAT which goes bump
inside the asylum that is my mind
for your most basic nature
is to nurture
and as my torment is self evident
allow this sojourning soul
to share the warmth of your residence
if only for the moon's passing "<--- Dude, sometimes your ink has a way of peeling back my skin.
Intellectually stimulated~
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Nov 2016 10:20pm
15th Nov 2016 10:17pm
The title brings about an intriguing
perception, "I wonder" we say.
then at last reading, one has no
choice but to respond with spiritual
shifts
How seamless you spun, delicate
and delish
*Thank you for adding my crepe
paper palace to your list
perception, "I wonder" we say.
then at last reading, one has no
choice but to respond with spiritual
shifts
How seamless you spun, delicate
and delish
*Thank you for adding my crepe
paper palace to your list
