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Not too good at the whole "Life" thing
If I had dreams, I forgot them
If I had friends, I ignored them
If I had promises I broke them
If I had hopes, I crushed them
If I had babies, I ate them
If I had friends, I ignored them
If I had promises I broke them
If I had hopes, I crushed them
If I had babies, I ate them
Published 1st Aug 2011
| Edited 9th Aug 2011
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1st Aug 2011 8:20am
I liked this, not only because I can completely relate, because to be even though it has few lines and not any detail, just stating words--it's almost like a song. Watch at 4'o clock I'm going to be singing this over tea time.
4th Aug 2011 6:25am
9th Aug 2011 00:39am
Cool people put commas before the space before the next word instead of after it unless striving for a poetic or linguistic effect in which case their creative license allows them to do so! Yo..
