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Put that Sucker to Good Use
I see red lips so predominant
surroundings sink into black and white
as a sexy voice speaks of dirty deeds
telling me how she’s good at sucking
now my curiosity has reached its peek
so to speak
eager to test out that sucker
I demand she greets me on her knees
she does so with a smile so devilishly
pulling out my stiff erection
then stroking the girth and length
her tongue moves up and down
treating me like I’m candy
wrapping lips around the tip
I place my hands firmly on the back of her head
pushing until the whole shaft’s gone in
she gags then spits, right before trying again
bobbing with a rhythm
I start to rub my fingers behind her ear
her eyes look up at me with such innocence
taking me over the edge, I groan out
exploding my load inside her mouth
with my manhood covered in red lipstick
she gets up and gathers her things
I give her ass a swift smack
right before she turns, winks, and says goodbye to me
surroundings sink into black and white
as a sexy voice speaks of dirty deeds
telling me how she’s good at sucking
now my curiosity has reached its peek
so to speak
eager to test out that sucker
I demand she greets me on her knees
she does so with a smile so devilishly
pulling out my stiff erection
then stroking the girth and length
her tongue moves up and down
treating me like I’m candy
wrapping lips around the tip
I place my hands firmly on the back of her head
pushing until the whole shaft’s gone in
she gags then spits, right before trying again
bobbing with a rhythm
I start to rub my fingers behind her ear
her eyes look up at me with such innocence
taking me over the edge, I groan out
exploding my load inside her mouth
with my manhood covered in red lipstick
she gets up and gathers her things
I give her ass a swift smack
right before she turns, winks, and says goodbye to me
Published 11th Oct 2016
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11th Oct 2016 1:47pm
I promise I won't curse this time, but damn... this is hot!!!
That's the way aha aha I like it ;-)
You make me thirsty...
Great write... it just rolls of the tongue...
That's the way aha aha I like it ;-)
You make me thirsty...
Great write... it just rolls of the tongue...
Now I'm all kinds of blushing hehe 😁
I should just replace my picture with your profile pic. Much sexier 😜
I should just replace my picture with your profile pic. Much sexier 😜
12th Oct 2016 12:02pm
Anonymous
11th Oct 2016 2:57pm
......this is sexy as hell 💋
The imagery is perfection. Every word is tasted and felt, deliciously.
There is something pretty magical, about red lipstick;)
Delicious ....erotic ink 💓
The imagery is perfection. Every word is tasted and felt, deliciously.
There is something pretty magical, about red lipstick;)
Delicious ....erotic ink 💓
12th Oct 2016 7:32am
Makes me so happy that you enjoyed Heart 💐🤗❤️
Red lips tell of only bad intentions 😉
Red lips tell of only bad intentions 😉
11th Oct 2016 3:44pm
Some seriously hot stuff here. Just straight to the physical and the joy of it. Really enjoyed the read.
12th Oct 2016 7:36am
Anonymous
11th Oct 2016 5:19pm
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12th Oct 2016 7:37am
Anonymous
11th Oct 2016 5:21pm
"now my curiosity has reached its peek
so to speak"
Love the play with words here! :) You've created a thing of beauty, full of delightful imagery and definitely heat! Very much enjoyed this! :)
Willow
so to speak"
Love the play with words here! :) You've created a thing of beauty, full of delightful imagery and definitely heat! Very much enjoyed this! :)
Willow
12th Oct 2016 7:38am
Anonymous
12th Oct 2016 7:22pm
Let me tell you what I love about erotic poetry such as this one ... first, it`s from a man`s perspective (and rarely is there a no~holds~barred) which gives me, the ``woman``, perfect insight of what a man truly wants and desires particularly in the fellatio dept.; and second, it`s such a mind~fuck - almost makes me want to drop to my knees ... such an erotic write, DC, cheers to you, Doll ... ;) ... ~xo, Devlin.
That's such an awesome comment 😁
If I made a girl believe in the importance of giving head, then I have done my job for society 😎
If I made a girl believe in the importance of giving head, then I have done my job for society 😎
16th Oct 2016 6:05pm
brillant, makes me wish it was me
me to be on the receiving end and me to be able to put such situations into words as masterfully as you do... well done
me to be on the receiving end and me to be able to put such situations into words as masterfully as you do... well done
17th Oct 2016 2:26am
17th Nov 2016 8:53am
The sucker to good use, is a purely sexstereotype signal for mor oral coming from both parties, now his red dick is it the words of the devils pie hole? Answer me answer me, just go down and shut your mouth, we will talk later about the Big O and why girls get locked in dungeons with lots of toys. I love this poem, love it love it....
17th Nov 2016 12:14pm
How can i shut up and go down if i answer you? lol
Glad you enjoyed, my energetic friend ;-)
Glad you enjoyed, my energetic friend ;-)
