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Sweet Submissive (A Duet With WithinTheHeart)
breathlessly awaiting
your touch
anticipation running
through my veins
your scent
makes me wet
desire slowly
dripping
I hear you
I inhale you
my body
aching for
your demands
your wants
your needs
I am here
open
for only
you
to please
your sight
deprived
hands tied
firmly behind back
completely bare
for your master/lover
feeling safe
within my needs
open palm taking
swiftly against your backside
pushing limits
without permission
gripping
pulling
on lovely locks
heavenly pain
for your pleasure
my body
betrays my mind
as moans
of pleasure
escape my lips
hard thrusts
go deep
hot, wet
tightness
envelopes
perfectly
wanting more
needing more
there can never
be enough
of your love
fingers dig
into my back
the pleads for more
awakens my beast
throwing
forcing
gripping your neck
the fear
arouses
thrusting in rhythm
kissing upon lips
leaving marks
permanent
burning into your soul
demanding
let go
the sting upon
my skin
the fingerprints
around my neck
breathless
as I taste your
sweat upon my lips
showing your love
my master's love
which makes
me whole
releasing you
carrying you
your heart
beats against mine
pushing your back
against the wall
feel my rapid breaths
upon your neck
close those eyes
let the feeling sink in
then let it all go
as I release my seed inside
my sweet submissive
you are protected
in my aggression
feeling you fill me
my release
with permission
is complete
my body,
heart and mind
belongs to you
for it is only
your love, master
that I crave
that I want
that I need
forevermore
your touch
anticipation running
through my veins
your scent
makes me wet
desire slowly
dripping
I hear you
I inhale you
my body
aching for
your demands
your wants
your needs
I am here
open
for only
you
to please
your sight
deprived
hands tied
firmly behind back
completely bare
for your master/lover
feeling safe
within my needs
open palm taking
swiftly against your backside
pushing limits
without permission
gripping
pulling
on lovely locks
heavenly pain
for your pleasure
my body
betrays my mind
as moans
of pleasure
escape my lips
hard thrusts
go deep
hot, wet
tightness
envelopes
perfectly
wanting more
needing more
there can never
be enough
of your love
fingers dig
into my back
the pleads for more
awakens my beast
throwing
forcing
gripping your neck
the fear
arouses
thrusting in rhythm
kissing upon lips
leaving marks
permanent
burning into your soul
demanding
let go
the sting upon
my skin
the fingerprints
around my neck
breathless
as I taste your
sweat upon my lips
showing your love
my master's love
which makes
me whole
releasing you
carrying you
your heart
beats against mine
pushing your back
against the wall
feel my rapid breaths
upon your neck
close those eyes
let the feeling sink in
then let it all go
as I release my seed inside
my sweet submissive
you are protected
in my aggression
feeling you fill me
my release
with permission
is complete
my body,
heart and mind
belongs to you
for it is only
your love, master
that I crave
that I want
that I need
forevermore
Published 17th Oct 2016
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Anonymous
17th Oct 2016 3:29pm
DC, I loved writing this with you!
Thank you so much for the invite. It is always an effortless pleasure.
You are awesome to write with, and I truly love how this turned out 💓
Thank you so much for the invite. It is always an effortless pleasure.
You are awesome to write with, and I truly love how this turned out 💓
17th Oct 2016 6:05pm
I can't believe we wrote this 😁 One, I think it's freaken awesome! And two, I was totally kidding on the idea, but came out so perfect.
It's nice to write with someone so talented.
Must be a libra thing 😉
It's nice to write with someone so talented.
Must be a libra thing 😉
17th Oct 2016 3:31pm
Now that's some hot stuff. Nice job to the two of you. Good flow back and forth, very much a sensory-in-the-moment feel in the words. Great job.
17th Oct 2016 6:07pm
17th Oct 2016 3:40pm
Damn!!! Oh, I'm cursing again... nevermind...
My mind went a bit haywire... this is such a delicious collab!
Hot and steamy piece of ink... you guys rock!!! My favorite lines:
my sweet submissive
you are protected
in my aggression > that is what dominance and submission is all about!
My mind went a bit haywire... this is such a delicious collab!
Hot and steamy piece of ink... you guys rock!!! My favorite lines:
my sweet submissive
you are protected
in my aggression > that is what dominance and submission is all about!
17th Oct 2016 5:35pm
this is sweet in a powerfully provocative S&M sort of way. Set's the tone for a "50 Shades" sort of afternoon.
Great writing you two.........
Great writing you two.........
17th Oct 2016 6:12pm
You don't have to watch your mouth around me Duende.
I'm pretty sure my family invented the word "fuck". 😄
Thanks so much. We are very greatful for your lovely words.
And I enjoyed those lines too 😉
I'm pretty sure my family invented the word "fuck". 😄
Thanks so much. We are very greatful for your lovely words.
And I enjoyed those lines too 😉
Thanks MusicallyMrM 😁
I kind of want to ask why you replayed under Duende, but I probably shouldn't ask questions 😜
As for 50 shades; we were more going for an s&m Twilight poem. Nailed it!
I kind of want to ask why you replayed under Duende, but I probably shouldn't ask questions 😜
As for 50 shades; we were more going for an s&m Twilight poem. Nailed it!
17th Oct 2016 3:54pm
I gotta learn to stop reading these explosive writes at work...gonna be a long day in the office. Yowza! :)
Didn't you say you were going to be known as DevilsHeart as a duo? I'm thinking that's a pretty apt name...temptation is definitely strong here! :)
Didn't you say you were going to be known as DevilsHeart as a duo? I'm thinking that's a pretty apt name...temptation is definitely strong here! :)
17th Oct 2016 6:28pm
I have those problems somedays. It makes for a long hard day... a VERY! long and hard day 😜
Yup, we are the DevilsHeart. We are doing 25 more poems together. She doesn't know that yet though 😁
Yup, we are the DevilsHeart. We are doing 25 more poems together. She doesn't know that yet though 😁
Anonymous
17th Oct 2016 4:46pm
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17th Oct 2016 6:30pm
18th Oct 2016 6:56am
DC and lovely Heart creamy Dom/sub action throughout so tastefully but seductively done ;)
love Crim
love Crim
18th Oct 2016 7:21am
I would love to one day get all the great poets on this site to do one big poem. Like a we are the world kind of poem. It would be an orgy of goodness, hehe.
Thanks lovely Crim 😁 Always appreciate your words."
Thanks lovely Crim 😁 Always appreciate your words."
18th Oct 2016 12:42pm
Ah! I think DU is sending me a message with all the Dom/sub poems in my feed lately. I think it's time to give in and pen some.
Wonderful, both of you! And I see that you've mentioned Twilight in a comment; that makes me happy. :)
Sexy ink with shivers!
tpd
Wonderful, both of you! And I see that you've mentioned Twilight in a comment; that makes me happy. :)
Sexy ink with shivers!
tpd
18th Oct 2016 3:06pm
It's that time of year for dom/sub poems I guess 😁 It must be all the sexy Halloween costumes that does it for people, hehe 😄
I'm guessing you're a Twilight fan?
I was kidding in the comment. This really had nothing to do with that, lol.
Thanks for the lovely comment 😁 We both thank you very much!
I'm guessing you're a Twilight fan?
I was kidding in the comment. This really had nothing to do with that, lol.
Thanks for the lovely comment 😁 We both thank you very much!
