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LOVE
Is the pail
And Beyond
It is rain water
It is the moon in the pail
A reflection of the heavenly
It is moon herself
And it is the light on the moon
For it is the sun and all suns
Born and yet to be born
Again (again)
For love is the mother and the born
For love is insightful
For it is the teacher
For love is wakeful
For love is the teacher
For love is delightful
For it is the teacher
For love is faithful
For love is grateful
For love is the teacher
For love is beautiful
For it is the teacher
But above all
Love is painful
For love is the teacher
It is butterfly
It is lake
It is the butterfly on the lake
It is the word said
Unsaid and incapable of being said
Before which there was nothing
But a yearning which imploded
In mega-antigravity and inevitably
Exploded with a BANG
The biggest bang
And it sounded like love being made
( in a small space )
Both Inner and Outer
A squealer a creamy dreamer
A screamer
Oh LOVE
Live love
Love life
For love is you and you evolve
Evolve love
Revolt and love
Revolve love
Relove a love that's revolving
Vault your fears and love
Vote for a love insoluble
But above all LOVE
For know Now
Nowhere is there nothing
And All Ways love
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Re. LOVE
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2016 5:41pm
Someone ought to give you a standing ovation! ... And I guess that ``someone`` will be me ... I`m rather *speechless*, to be honest with you (and for anyone reading this comment) because I would have never interpreted LOVE on such a wide and various range; something you have captured here brilliantly, ingeniously ... love to you & this wonderful piece! ... ~Devlin.
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3rd Oct 2016 10:51pm
Re. LOVE
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Oct 2016 6:31pm
3rd Oct 2016 6:28pm
For love is the "Teacher". Always Whale. Always
✨Peace Trish
*as soon as I am allowed more space. This is going on my RL.*
✨Peace Trish
*as soon as I am allowed more space. This is going on my RL.*
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Anonymous
- Edited 4th Aug 2023 8:45pm
3rd Oct 2016 9:11pm
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3rd Oct 2016 10:34pm
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3rd Oct 2016 10:53pm
Re. LOVE
Anonymous
4th Oct 2016 1:02am
BRAVO!!! Tipping my pen in respect to you and talent.......absolutely brilliant ink.......defientely spun my emotions.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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4th Oct 2016 5:15am
Re. LOVE
Anonymous
4th Oct 2016 3:47pm
Beautiful, perfect..brimming with wisdom!
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Anonymous
- Edited 4th Oct 2016 11:19pm
4th Oct 2016 11:16pm
I would love to hear this one read, several times, by many different people, because I think the expression and inflection opportunities in this piece are myriad.
The repetition of the idea of love as teacher is so effective, more so because you played with changing the phrase to draw it back to attention, instead of allowing the eye and mind to gloss over those lines. The phrasing and sound play in your words kept me engaged and delivered your message in a way that had me saying "yes" many times along the way. Love is everything; love is this poem. And I thank you for it.
The repetition of the idea of love as teacher is so effective, more so because you played with changing the phrase to draw it back to attention, instead of allowing the eye and mind to gloss over those lines. The phrasing and sound play in your words kept me engaged and delivered your message in a way that had me saying "yes" many times along the way. Love is everything; love is this poem. And I thank you for it.
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5th Oct 2016 5:43am
Marie K waking and reading this is a joy - it's a verse meant to be read - I'd be delighted if you'd do me the great honour of your voice and your passion and your time
Re. LOVE
5th Oct 2016 00:19am
love, I suppose, was named right after loneliness.
we are joyful to find there is just enough room in that small space...
we are joyful to find there is just enough room in that small space...
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5th Oct 2016 5:44am
Re. LOVE
6th Oct 2016 8:58pm
"Before which there was nothing
But a yearning which imploded
In mega-antigravity and inevitably
Exploded with a BANG
The biggest bang
And it sounded like love being made
( in a small space )
Both Inner and Outer "
for love is the 'god particle'
and this all encompassing
vibe [truth] is incredibly inspiring..
yes indeed
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6th Oct 2016 9:25pm