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Before I Let Go.........
“Trains and planes
and boats
and buses
characteristically
evoke a common attitude of blue ….”
...balls tightening
heart racing
fingers upon her clitoris,
pulsating
interrelating, elevating
juices begging to
start to flow.....
…..reaching for a grande plateau
sweat,
labia starting to swell
the heat inside her
rising like a living hell
the sensuality of her smell
our bodies losing
all
earthly
control......heaven knows
spontaneous vocalizations
kaleidoscopic pictures
over my head
thrashing each other
all about the bed
choreographed thrusting
in and out
making it
wetter
and
wetter
and wetter......
“ nothing has ever felt like this
nothing has ever been this good
and nothing has ever been this right
nothing so sweet......”
such an expressive grind
syllabic incantations
souls caught up in moments
and life times....together
trembling like a feather in the wind
just before the bomb explodes
anal constriction
vaginal contradictions
deep phallic pulsations
like a prayer,
high, spiritual elation just...
….before *we* let go
Published 1st Oct 2016
| Edited 3rd Oct 2016
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2nd Oct 2016 3:56am
Sultry piece of ink!
I love the subtle rhyme in this one and the fact that though it's explicit, you leave much the imagination!
Brilliant phrasing... as always...
I love the subtle rhyme in this one and the fact that though it's explicit, you leave much the imagination!
Brilliant phrasing... as always...
2nd Oct 2016 4:36am
3rd Oct 2016 00:41am
3rd Oct 2016 12:45pm
Anonymous
- Edited 11th May 2018 11:47am
3rd Oct 2016 4:17pm
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3rd Oct 2016 6:47pm
Exactly my friend. Do you realize that getting someone to describe what sex feels like or an Orgasm for example......that is one of the most difficult descriptions that you can get from most people. I am constantly trying to find the most poetic way myself to describe the feeling accurately. It's a subject of many of my poems. An obsession (and I don't know why)
Thanks for reading 😊
Thanks for reading 😊
8th Oct 2016 1:30pm
8th Oct 2016 4:51pm
Well thank you.....but I just might find myself slightly offended if you didn't "let go" 😋
Anonymous
11th Nov 2016 6:51pm
I have read my share of
Erotica on here but nothing
like what you dip us in
damn it, im a contradictionist
this is ugh the kind I like
my oculars taste.
Erotica on here but nothing
like what you dip us in
damn it, im a contradictionist
this is ugh the kind I like
my oculars taste.
11th Nov 2016 7:13pm
Well thank you.....please continue to bathe your eyes in my intended, decadent feast 😋
