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BECAME
She was forged in white fire transmuted to iron
But iron neglected rusts and crumbles to dust
On the surface to the eyes she became passive
But when passive iron is met by active iron
It is born again
Catalytic waves of ion activation immersed her
Baptized by fire
She was then diamondised by a violent extrusion
She was no longer lumpen coal of the hearth
Her atoms connected she became strong
Her atoms conducted light in holy timpani
A diamond shankha
An adamantine construct in stormy sunrise
Baptized by fire
She became Bellona Durga Dihya and Sekhmet
Of iron and diamond born a vitality a calamity
Against atrophy the karma of earth combined
The star of Astraea the sword of Xuannu
The battlecry of Alala for a world renewed
But iron neglected rusts and crumbles to dust
On the surface to the eyes she became passive
But when passive iron is met by active iron
It is born again
Catalytic waves of ion activation immersed her
Baptized by fire
She was then diamondised by a violent extrusion
She was no longer lumpen coal of the hearth
Her atoms connected she became strong
Her atoms conducted light in holy timpani
A diamond shankha
An adamantine construct in stormy sunrise
Baptized by fire
She became Bellona Durga Dihya and Sekhmet
Of iron and diamond born a vitality a calamity
Against atrophy the karma of earth combined
The star of Astraea the sword of Xuannu
The battlecry of Alala for a world renewed
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Re. BECAME
You have me utterly speechless
in this moment.. . this felt very
genuine, good and beautiful read.
Sealing my lips, but letting myself
breathe..
but here the spiritual reciprocity
within is level'd in a state of equilibrium.
ah!, synchronicity, she became self
...at last whole
I love it so much. in'joyed
-Howlings
P.S... So my mind, heart and soul betray'd
me.
in this moment.. . this felt very
genuine, good and beautiful read.
Sealing my lips, but letting myself
breathe..
but here the spiritual reciprocity
within is level'd in a state of equilibrium.
ah!, synchronicity, she became self
...at last whole
I love it so much. in'joyed
-Howlings
P.S... So my mind, heart and soul betray'd
me.
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Re: Re. BECAME
25th Sep 2016 10:20pm
As we change from one thing to another - our transmutation is our evolution - destiny and duty
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25th Sep 2016 10:21pm
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26th Sep 2016 2:46am
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26th Sep 2016 4:30am
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26th Sep 2016 2:10pm
"Iron sharpens Iron" was never better described.
Her atoms connected she became strong
Her atoms conducted light in holy timpani
A diamond shankha
An adamantine construct in stormy sunrise
Perfect.
Her atoms connected she became strong
Her atoms conducted light in holy timpani
A diamond shankha
An adamantine construct in stormy sunrise
Perfect.
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Re: Re. BECAME
26th Sep 2016 3:37pm
ah sister - yes all the elements are present in all of us all of the time - quite an opportunity
Re. BECAME
26th Sep 2016 2:45pm
I have no idea where your words come from or how they're fused together, but yours is a singularly beautiful voice and I find myself with mouth hanging open in awe after each reading. These lines are forever embedded in my mind...
"She was forged in white fire transmuted to iron
But iron neglected rusts and crumbles to dust
On the surface to the eyes she became passive
But when passive iron is met by active iron
It is born again
Catalytic waves of ion activation immersed her
Baptized by fire"
Thank you so much for your voice.
Willow
"She was forged in white fire transmuted to iron
But iron neglected rusts and crumbles to dust
On the surface to the eyes she became passive
But when passive iron is met by active iron
It is born again
Catalytic waves of ion activation immersed her
Baptized by fire"
Thank you so much for your voice.
Willow
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26th Sep 2016 3:38pm
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Anonymous
26th Sep 2016 7:45pm
You truly are a gift. Anyone who enjoys literature's beauty. The just need to read yours.
Peace Always
✨Trish
Peace Always
✨Trish
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26th Sep 2016 11:00pm
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26th Sep 2016 8:28pm
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26th Sep 2016 11:43pm
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Anonymous
27th Sep 2016 10:46pm
I saw a lot of circles in this. Reaccurances. Reincarnation. The poem is very fluid in its theme. There's some beautiful language and imagery in here. That alone makes this worth reading.
Thank you for the read.
Thank you for the read.
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28th Sep 2016 8:04am