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ABC (Madness in Grass)
A house adrift in time and space,
Bolting windows of gypsy glass -
Cat nor dog may breach this place -
Designed to hide madness in grass.
The fields extend their lease apace.
Bolting windows of gypsy glass -
Cat nor dog may breach this place -
Designed to hide madness in grass.
The fields extend their lease apace.
Published 20th Sep 2016
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Ever sat and stared at a star
Feeling sand between your toes?
Gave dreams of passions held from far
Housing talent that never grows?
Strength is drawn from the scar
It don't matter how much music I play, how many times I stand clapping hands and sing songing. Counting to 8 seems to be a rather contentious issue for me. For this reason I have to say Jack you show your rights to being the original OG. The first letters the beat count and the rhyme sceme are on point! Unlike me the poem ends up making coherent scence. Well done ✔...
21st Sep 2016 2:57am
Aside from the one two many l's in "talent", I'd say your effort is pretty darn good! The last sentence is particularly powerful. Thanks for dropping by! - Jack xxx
21st Sep 2016 6:06pm
