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The height of intimacy
.
.
I've never loved so truly
as I do the men
who kill me in my dreams.
I'm afraid of what this means
for me.
.
.
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I've never loved so truly
as I do the men
who kill me in my dreams.
I'm afraid of what this means
for me.
.
.
Published 19th Sep 2016
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19th Sep 2016 8:00pm
20th Sep 2016 8:01pm
They're certainly alluring, though sense says one shouldn't be drawn to their ilk.
21st Sep 2016 8:25am
24th Sep 2016 6:17am
Great title and the first three lines are powerful. In my humble opinion I don't think you need the last two lines unless , perhaps, you show a word picture of how the fear manifests itself. Nice job !
24th Sep 2016 10:52pm
I wanted the last part to be included, because I didn't want it seem like I was romanticising the situation. It's a legitimately worrying realisation.
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
24th Apr 2019 9:28pm
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