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Evil inside her
She kicked and thrashed wildly
She cried, flailed, and screamed
He thrust his fuck-stick inside, violently
Ignoring her cries and pleas
Tears streamed down her face
This excited him beyond delight
He licked them just for the taste
He rammed his cock harder inside
Her pussy wasn't enough
He flipped her over, she tried to fight
He whispered in her ear, "you love it rough,
After I cum, you're going to die"
Authors note: written for the comp, evilution.
She cried, flailed, and screamed
He thrust his fuck-stick inside, violently
Ignoring her cries and pleas
Tears streamed down her face
This excited him beyond delight
He licked them just for the taste
He rammed his cock harder inside
Her pussy wasn't enough
He flipped her over, she tried to fight
He whispered in her ear, "you love it rough,
After I cum, you're going to die"
Authors note: written for the comp, evilution.
Published 19th Sep 2016
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20th Sep 2016 3:06pm
20th Sep 2016 8:25pm
Yes indeed. This one was difficult for me to write, for obvious reasons. But, I'm definitely branching out a bit. Testing the waters, to see what people really enjoy reading. Thanks for the feedback :)
18th Nov 2016 8:43pm
I have never seen or heard of a dick being referred to as a fuck stick before , I love et, just like this little bare write. Nice to see you take part in these dark challenges
18th Nov 2016 11:11pm
I'm still fairly shocked that I wrote this, and have it up. But, what's interesting about fuck-stick...Billy Bob Thornton referred to his dick as his fuck-stick in the movie, "Bad Santa" Lol
27th Nov 2016 9:57am
I think reaching into the deepest darkest corners of our minds is a must. Sometimes our conflicting disturbing thoughts make the best writes. I guiltily enjoyed it so thanks for sharing.
27th Nov 2016 5:35pm
This one still makes me cringe, each time I read it. I definitely, guiltily wrote it. Lol. Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!
