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Wings of Pegasus
we come as licks of flame from fiery brands
ignite in bodies' streams our loves’ express
like day’s hard sun that drowns in churning sea
with wings of fire that spread like Pegasus
Published 14th Sep 2016
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- Edited 14th Sep 2016 8:23pm
14th Sep 2016 8:22pm
there is great imagery here! it is a strong conviction to be compared to pegasus wings. My only complaint being that i'm not exactly sure what this is about. who is 'we' in the first line? and where are we coming? so since i'm a bit confused, i feel like maybe this is unfinished. maybe it's just a snippet of a larger piece.
edited to add:
OHHHHHHHHH! ha! i just realized this was put in the erotic category and that come is not a 'come with me to the store' type of come. ;)
edited to add:
OHHHHHHHHH! ha! i just realized this was put in the erotic category and that come is not a 'come with me to the store' type of come. ;)
Yes... I saw Pegasus rise out of the setting sun, and thought of this Pegasus born of the "marriage" of the sun and sea... The rest just seemed to arise...
17th Sep 2016 7:28pm
17th Sep 2016 7:57pm
Thank you, dear Howlings, for your like and comment... Always deeply appreciated...
geoff
geoff
