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The thorns of a rose
He makes me get on my hands and knees
as if I were his doll, depleted of emotions,
to do with as he desires. Before he inserts
his angry inches, he kisses then bites
my baby-powder ass, spanks me without
appeal; and I know he smirks at my girlish
whimpers. When he forces himself into me,
I am sure it's more than I can bare, until,
until..... I fall deeper, ever deeper, into his heart.
When he fucks me like that.
Published 10th Sep 2016
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10th Sep 2016 2:26pm
I have yet to fully understand the dynamics of a sub/dom relationship. I just know that
it takes a great deal of trust
to let one do as they want to you.
Trust is one of the foundations of love. I still feel that there is something lacking although I find it intriguing.
I do find this line a
a sinful treat..
"Before he inserts
his angry inches, he kisses then bites my baby-powder ass, spanks me without appeal; and I know he smirks at my girlish whimpers."
Keith
it takes a great deal of trust
to let one do as they want to you.
Trust is one of the foundations of love. I still feel that there is something lacking although I find it intriguing.
I do find this line a
a sinful treat..
"Before he inserts
his angry inches, he kisses then bites my baby-powder ass, spanks me without appeal; and I know he smirks at my girlish whimpers."
Keith
10th Sep 2016 11:48pm
I think this kind of relationship is misunderstood quite often and yes,trust is a big part of it.
I do appreciate your taking the time to share your insights and am glad you enjoyed.
Thanks much
I do appreciate your taking the time to share your insights and am glad you enjoyed.
Thanks much
Anonymous
10th Sep 2016 3:23pm
*beautiful. . .intense, yet sensual*. . .~xo, Devlin.
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11th Sep 2016 5:22am
Before he inserts his angry inches > I love it when people stay away from explicit phrasing and I see so much creativity here... this line is a great example of that! Angry inches... I never could have come up with that myself, but I love it apart from the fact that I love your whole poem!!!
11th Sep 2016 10:15am
Your ink paints untamed yet erupting desire that cannot appeal to interruption and a soul given to giving till satiation
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