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Broken
Morning brings a new desire
to raise the ante ever higher.
I told you many times before
that I will love you evermore.
This daybreak is more the same,
my heart beating the same refrain.
Once again..calling out your name.
But unlike the days before,
It cries and cries it... evermore.
Not to be silenced by fear
or threat...
Not wanting to know the feel
of regret....
It shouts your name for all to hear...
In last ditch efforts to keep you near.
So just to make it crystal clear...
My broken heart is yours...my dear.
Author's note:
A place and time
in the past.
to raise the ante ever higher.
I told you many times before
that I will love you evermore.
This daybreak is more the same,
my heart beating the same refrain.
Once again..calling out your name.
But unlike the days before,
It cries and cries it... evermore.
Not to be silenced by fear
or threat...
Not wanting to know the feel
of regret....
It shouts your name for all to hear...
In last ditch efforts to keep you near.
So just to make it crystal clear...
My broken heart is yours...my dear.
Author's note:
A place and time
in the past.
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Re. Broken
6th Sep 2016 6:46pm
The feeling of regret hurts far worse than the actual heartache. Kudos for going for it. Nice write.
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Re: Re. Broken
9th Sep 2016 2:09am
Thank you for the read.
It was a difficult reality
to face. It is a sad day
when only one remains
in love.
Keith
It was a difficult reality
to face. It is a sad day
when only one remains
in love.
Keith
Re. Broken
Anonymous
6th Sep 2016 8:33pm
Such a painfully beautiful piece, my friend. 💓
The depths of your heart has overflowed onto this page, and is felt.
The depths of your heart has overflowed onto this page, and is felt.
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Re: Re. Broken
9th Sep 2016 2:12am
To love with all that
you are and to be
no longer loved in
return. It is a harsh
reality that leaves
you questioning
yourself. Time
heals.
Thank you
My dear...
Keith
you are and to be
no longer loved in
return. It is a harsh
reality that leaves
you questioning
yourself. Time
heals.
Thank you
My dear...
Keith
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Re: Re. Broken
9th Sep 2016 2:15am
I would like to thank you
for the read Tim.
I wish the feeling
on no one....
The heart in its
depths feels
pain like no
other place.
Keith
for the read Tim.
I wish the feeling
on no one....
The heart in its
depths feels
pain like no
other place.
Keith
Re. Broken
7th Sep 2016 00:26am
I'm glad I read your author's note. This sounds like a devastating break up, her leaving despite you making every effort. I've made last ditch tries myself to save a relationship, and it didn't work. Once she made up her mind it was adios. Thing is I didn't see it coming, which is on me. Anyway, "Broken" is powerful work knot2much. I hope you've healed thoroughly.
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Re: Re. Broken
9th Sep 2016 2:18am
I would like to thank you
for your thoughtful comment.
I would also like to thank you
for sharing your experience.
Btw it was a marriage of
27years. Thank you again
for your kindness...
Keith
for your thoughtful comment.
I would also like to thank you
for sharing your experience.
Btw it was a marriage of
27years. Thank you again
for your kindness...
Keith
Re. Broken
7th Sep 2016 3:58am
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9th Sep 2016 2:19am
Re. Broken
16th Sep 2016 1:56am
I can relate to this big time. Made me think of things I havent in a very long time. Which isnt a bad thing, only a broken thing. love this and u! <3
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Re: Re. Broken
My Dear Lady...
It is so hard to imagine ever being happy again or going on while weathering through such a thing. Time has a way of healing the heart. The pain is the price we pay in our search for happiness. I am glad you liked and I loves you too.
Keith
It is so hard to imagine ever being happy again or going on while weathering through such a thing. Time has a way of healing the heart. The pain is the price we pay in our search for happiness. I am glad you liked and I loves you too.
Keith
Re: Re. Broken
16th Sep 2016 9:52pm
none of us would be here writing anything, unless we all felt some sort of pain. It forces us to totally welcome the good with open arms and hold on to it forever.... <3
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