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Anonymous
2nd Sep 2016 8:20pm
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2nd Sep 2016 10:52pm
23rd Nov 2016 2:11pm
This is short and sweet and speaks truth.
I would change the last line to ('souls catch fire' instead of 'soul caught fire') but it is your poem and this is just my opinion and it is your opinion that created this beautiful poem.
I would change the last line to ('souls catch fire' instead of 'soul caught fire') but it is your poem and this is just my opinion and it is your opinion that created this beautiful poem.
24th Nov 2016 00:45am
Thankyou for your feedback and that would sound better :) thanks for you advice
