A Good Way to Write

The title implies something positive, the ending implies something negative.  There seems to be an overall disconnect.

To be quite honest, I didn't get a whole lot out of this and not because it's short, just because of the disconnect and that gives rise to a general feeling of incompleteness.  It seems like you were stuck for ideas but you just thought out loud and wrote it down.

after having a think about it, i like the idea. you could probably either put a little more work into the wording or make it a line or two longer, only because of that disconnect DB mentioned. i got what you were trying to say but it could do with some extra punch. [:

just the kinda poem i love; one that molds to my mind;
one that lets me in (a reader's poem).

there really SO many interpretations: as many as there are readers.
here are a few of mine:

1. when you write, don't hold back, use your whole self; then, leave what sticks to the page.
2. write drunk, edit sober.
3. creativity requires the destruction of what was to make the pieces to construct what will.
4. pick out the good stuff, hide the crap.

but that's just me...
on my reading list!

profound indeed. I vote interpretation # 3

this is the epitome of the word concise. i enjoy the density of it