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Perigee of my bondage
Not only do your fingerprints
Stain my imperfect skin
They remain inside me
An afterimage burnt upon my heart
Men are too tough for tears
So I cry them for both of us
I sit by your chair while you read
And rub your hand across my salty cheek
Shared coffee at midnight
Flavored with the spirits of Ireland
Warm our lonely hearts and hands
A table for two,reservations for one
When I hold you close at night
I taste your sadness while you sleep
It makes my soft heart restless
So I whisper pretty things into your dreams
Stain my imperfect skin
They remain inside me
An afterimage burnt upon my heart
Men are too tough for tears
So I cry them for both of us
I sit by your chair while you read
And rub your hand across my salty cheek
Shared coffee at midnight
Flavored with the spirits of Ireland
Warm our lonely hearts and hands
A table for two,reservations for one
When I hold you close at night
I taste your sadness while you sleep
It makes my soft heart restless
So I whisper pretty things into your dreams
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Re. Perigee of my bondage
28th Aug 2016 10:51am
ah beautiful lady this is so loving a write especially the ending..
love Crim
love Crim
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28th Aug 2016 11:10am
Re. Perigee of my bondage
28th Aug 2016 11:01am
coffee & Irish cream, better than a cocktail.
we take poetry & make poetry to ease the sadness,
& we go where the dreams take us...
we take poetry & make poetry to ease the sadness,
& we go where the dreams take us...
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Re. Perigee of my bondage
28th Aug 2016 11:07am
Re. Perigee of my bondage
28th Aug 2016 1:18pm
Such a wonderful write...and then that last line and I got teary. So beautiful :)
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29th Aug 2016 00:04am
Re. Perigee of my bondage
28th Aug 2016 1:58pm
Men's shoulders are bigger that we rest on them. But, women's nurturing hearts are deeper that men rest in them. We never stop giving, even in sleep.
Lovely, Kasai
Lovely, Kasai
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29th Aug 2016 00:06am
Re. Perigee of my bondage
28th Aug 2016 5:19pm
The beauty of these lines
When I hold you close at night
I taste your sadness while you sleep
It makes my soft heart restless
So I whisper pretty things into your dreams
Sent a tingle through my body! Love this!
When I hold you close at night
I taste your sadness while you sleep
It makes my soft heart restless
So I whisper pretty things into your dreams
Sent a tingle through my body! Love this!
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29th Aug 2016 00:08am
Re. Perigee of my bondage
28th Aug 2016 9:36pm
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29th Aug 2016 00:10am
Re. Perigee of my bondage
Anonymous
31st Aug 2016 5:15am
You've covered all the senses here; it pulls me into the piece and allows me to feel the quiet passion you've described.
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31st Aug 2016 7:19am
Re. Perigee of my bondage
Anonymous
31st Aug 2016 9:52am
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31st Aug 2016 10:30am
Re. Perigee of my bondage
31st Aug 2016 6:00pm
Re. Perigee of my bondage
30th Sep 2016 4:02pm
Oh wow, utterly heartbreaking and tender and beautiful. I am swept away by your vulnerability and love and affection for her. Gorgeous write. A truly softly shattering piece.
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Re: Re. Perigee of my bondage
30th Sep 2016 8:23pm
Such an amazing comment,thankyou so much. Glad you felt the emotion behind the words,truly appreciated...