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Glamorous heaven
Wanted to sing without a body
but the mirror between myself and I
was reflecting a useless need
to rest my head
on a glamorous heaven
free of sound and movement
full of tears and innocence
planting my soul
uprooting my destination.
***Writer´s note: Inspired from the painting of Zdzisław Beksiński. Written for Katja´s comp.
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Re. Glamorous heaven
22nd Aug 2016 3:25pm
More often than not I read your poems and find myself with my mouth just hanging open at the landscapes and thoughts. Usually I just hit Like and move on with insufficient words...today I thought I'd just tell you...you leave me speechless. :)
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. Glamorous heaven
22nd Aug 2016 3:30pm
Thank you so much dear Willow...
You leave me with tears of happiness on my face :)))
Kiss,
Art
You leave me with tears of happiness on my face :)))
Kiss,
Art
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22nd Aug 2016 5:00pm
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Re. Glamorous heaven
25th Aug 2016 4:58pm
Re: Re. Glamorous heaven
25th Aug 2016 10:09pm
Although it was an out of mind experience (poetry), it could perfectly be an out of body experience too :))
Thank you for reading and comment! :)
Thank you for reading and comment! :)
Re. Glamorous heaven
5th Sep 2016 4:51pm
Outrageously creative!
You are one of the rawest
and rarest I know
My Arty love but this.. I am
feeling in my core.. Churning
away.
Yes
-Howlings
You are one of the rawest
and rarest I know
My Arty love but this.. I am
feeling in my core.. Churning
away.
Yes
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Glamorous heaven
5th Sep 2016 9:49pm
Oh! Thank you so much for these beautiful words Howlings!
You really give me strength and make me happy :)))
I leave you a beautiful song with an amazing scene for inspiration ;)
Art
You really give me strength and make me happy :)))
I leave you a beautiful song with an amazing scene for inspiration ;)
Art
Re. Glamorous heaven
9th Sep 2016 00:14am
A very creative piece,
Very few words for such a vividly descriptive write
Enjoyable read
Very few words for such a vividly descriptive write
Enjoyable read
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9th Sep 2016 00:36am