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Tango
Tongues dance a tango trance
lips meet to please a playful
tease of lips on lips and
tongues wet within
Around we slide
until moans and sighs
drive us high and glide us
over mountains of pleasure
Nails are scratching backs
are arching aching for
the primal release
of innate needs
Gliding and sliding
slithering and slipping
sublimely surrendered we
moan and groan in music my
rhythm in line with your rhyme
Ochos and pivots entertwine
in a teasing tango treasure
building pressure until
we explode in peaks
of pure pleasure
lips meet to please a playful
tease of lips on lips and
tongues wet within
Around we slide
until moans and sighs
drive us high and glide us
over mountains of pleasure
Nails are scratching backs
are arching aching for
the primal release
of innate needs
Gliding and sliding
slithering and slipping
sublimely surrendered we
moan and groan in music my
rhythm in line with your rhyme
Ochos and pivots entertwine
in a teasing tango treasure
building pressure until
we explode in peaks
of pure pleasure
Author's Note
MR - Tango De Roxanne.
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Re. Tango
Anonymous
20th Aug 2016 9:37pm
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Anonymous
21st Aug 2016 00:50am
I'm dizzy. . . but I love it. . .~xo, Devlin.
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21st Aug 2016 6:55pm
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Re: Re. Tango
22nd Aug 2016 3:31am
Thank you so much for calling this a soul engaging kiss :-)
"the alliteration and the rhyme as if they are the two seperate entities" > never looked at it that way, thank you for mentioning it... now I love my own poem even more ;-)
I truly appreciate your comment and view!!!
"the alliteration and the rhyme as if they are the two seperate entities" > never looked at it that way, thank you for mentioning it... now I love my own poem even more ;-)
I truly appreciate your comment and view!!!
Re. Tango
21st Aug 2016 8:16pm
'Around we slide
until moans and sighs
drive us high and glide us
over mountains of pleasure '
Love this!
until moans and sighs
drive us high and glide us
over mountains of pleasure '
Love this!
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22nd Aug 2016 3:33am
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22nd Aug 2016 3:33am
Re. Tango
22nd Aug 2016 5:44pm
Duende..first off
I truly dig how you
Format your poetry.
Your words glide across
The eyes..
Secondly. ..your arrangement
Of words makes me smile..
The cleverness...just love it..
And third...the connectivity. .
The intimacy here leaves behind
Such a soothing feeling ....
Very lovely indeed..
I truly dig how you
Format your poetry.
Your words glide across
The eyes..
Secondly. ..your arrangement
Of words makes me smile..
The cleverness...just love it..
And third...the connectivity. .
The intimacy here leaves behind
Such a soothing feeling ....
Very lovely indeed..
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Re: Re. Tango
23rd Aug 2016 5:52am
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment!
You made me smile by mentioning you dig how I format my poetry, that means a lot te me!
Same goes for the fact that you saw the arrangement and felt the intimacy...
Much appreciated, Naajir!
You made me smile by mentioning you dig how I format my poetry, that means a lot te me!
Same goes for the fact that you saw the arrangement and felt the intimacy...
Much appreciated, Naajir!
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6th Sep 2016 5:58am
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6th Sep 2016 8:27am
Thank you so much!
I feel honored that I'm one of your first three comments :-)
Welcome to DUP!
I feel honored that I'm one of your first three comments :-)
Welcome to DUP!
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Anonymous
7th Sep 2016 5:13am
I enjoyed the way you played with sound in this one: rhymes, alliteration, assonance. Little goodies to find on nearly every line, and the visual peaks and valleys in your form allude to the rise and fall of the dance. A lovely verbal tango. :-)
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7th Sep 2016 4:37pm
You made me giggle with your 'little goodies' :-)
I'm glad you enjoyded it... it was definitely a joy to write!
Thank you so much for another amazing comment, I appreciate you so much!
I'm glad you enjoyded it... it was definitely a joy to write!
Thank you so much for another amazing comment, I appreciate you so much!
Re. Tango
15th Sep 2016 5:44pm
Your phrasing and rhythmic alliteration is almost like a song, like lilting leaves dancing from the trees beneath a fall sky. I would love to dance with you Ms. "D"
Astonishingly good !!
Astonishingly good !!
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Re: Re. Tango
15th Sep 2016 6:21pm
Thank you once more...
I worked hard on the alliteration and the rhythm, so I'm glad you could 'hear' it!
Astonishingly good > how about that for an ego boost ;-)
I worked hard on the alliteration and the rhythm, so I'm glad you could 'hear' it!
Astonishingly good > how about that for an ego boost ;-)
Re. Tango
31st Jan 2017 4:38am
I see the primal passion...lovely crescendo flowing to a perfect beat...loved your acrostic interpretation : )
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31st Jan 2017 6:41am
Wow... that's such an amzing comment, thank you so much! I still want to write an acrostichon one day, but found out it isn't easy ;-)