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Velvet
Let me velvet
velour and wool
you and voile my
wishes in whispers
Let me brocade
bouclé and batiste
you and weave you
in waves of pleasure
Painting you
with shades of
chiffon cashmere
and crêpe de chine
i’ll cover you
in cotton kisses
in silken caresses
and zibeline wishes
Let me velour
you devour you
and rinzu you with
my angora affection
Let me bamboo
and butterfly you
until you’re floating
to a higher dimension
velour and wool
you and voile my
wishes in whispers
Let me brocade
bouclé and batiste
you and weave you
in waves of pleasure
Painting you
with shades of
chiffon cashmere
and crêpe de chine
i’ll cover you
in cotton kisses
in silken caresses
and zibeline wishes
Let me velour
you devour you
and rinzu you with
my angora affection
Let me bamboo
and butterfly you
until you’re floating
to a higher dimension
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Re. Velvet
17th Aug 2016 9:42pm
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17th Aug 2016 9:55pm
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
17th Aug 2016 9:46pm
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18th Aug 2016 5:13am
Sir poetik slick spill...
LMAO here, thanks for your brilliant comment dear :-)
LMAO here, thanks for your brilliant comment dear :-)
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17th Aug 2016 11:50pm
Re: Re. Velvet
18th Aug 2016 7:10am
Wow... exquisitely erotic? You made me smile :-)
Thanks for you wonderful comment, dear!
Love, Duende
Thanks for you wonderful comment, dear!
Love, Duende
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Nov 2018 00:49am
18th Aug 2016 00:39am
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Anonymous
- Edited 18th Aug 2016 1:16am
18th Aug 2016 1:05am
I love this! It's playful, clever, and sexy.
The only suggestion I'd make is using a different word in place of one of your velours. With such fun word play, a repeat feels like a missed opportunity.
The only suggestion I'd make is using a different word in place of one of your velours. With such fun word play, a repeat feels like a missed opportunity.
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Thank you for loving this and including it in your reading list :-)
I don't mind a repeat...
I don't mind a repeat...
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2016 1:22am
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2016 7:48am
First a piano, now velvet?. . .I can honestly say that I'm anticipating your next object (of poetic desire). . .Enjoyed, immensely. . .~xo, Devlin.
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Re: Re. Velvet
18th Aug 2016 9:22am
You make me blush ;-)
I feel honored that you anticipate my next object!
Thank you... you've just made my day :-)
Love, Duende
I feel honored that you anticipate my next object!
Thank you... you've just made my day :-)
Love, Duende
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2016 11:57am
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18th Aug 2016 12:11pm
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2016 2:22pm
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Re: Re. Velvet
18th Aug 2016 3:06pm
Yes!!! Glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for the compliment on both the painting and the ending, you made me smile :-)
Thanks for the compliment on both the painting and the ending, you made me smile :-)
Re. Velvet
19th Aug 2016 9:55am
Re: Re. Velvet
19th Aug 2016 12:22pm
Wow... you make me blush!
Thanks for your amazing compliment and including this one in your reading list :-)
Thanks for your amazing compliment and including this one in your reading list :-)
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Anonymous
20th Aug 2016 12:30pm
A velvet heaven awaits I'm sure Duende...brilliant as always
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Let's hope so, Ultra!
Thanks so much for another amazing compliment!
Always nice to hear from you :-)
Thanks so much for another amazing compliment!
Always nice to hear from you :-)
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Anonymous
22nd Aug 2016 5:55am
Bello scrivere mia cara ....
Trish
Trish
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22nd Aug 2016 8:14am
Re. Velvet
13th Sep 2016 3:49am
Oui, ma miel.. .
myfreakingachingangelsandgods..
and all that is between.
-Howlings
myfreakingachingangelsandgods..
and all that is between.
-Howlings
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13th Sep 2016 4:44am