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This heart hunts wild
I gaze out the window
To the swaying pines
Lost in ash can thoughts
There is only quiet on the breeze
A silver owl hanging
From a long,silver chain
Cast's rainbows on my skin
When the sun shines through it's eyes
The sky is not blue
But an odd shade of melancholy
For some reason it looks sad
And I share in it's lament
I seek my thoughts
Trying to draw them out
But they hide in the trees,camouflaged
I can see them stir in the tall grass
I know what I must do
My weapon is dull and forgotten
So I hone it to a fine,precise edge
Sharp and ready for battle
The trees see me first
And my words remain ellusive
I stalk them,determined and patient
A hunter in the wood
I kiss the dirt
Blending with the forest floor
When my words come out of hiding
I will capture them in poetry
To the swaying pines
Lost in ash can thoughts
There is only quiet on the breeze
A silver owl hanging
From a long,silver chain
Cast's rainbows on my skin
When the sun shines through it's eyes
The sky is not blue
But an odd shade of melancholy
For some reason it looks sad
And I share in it's lament
I seek my thoughts
Trying to draw them out
But they hide in the trees,camouflaged
I can see them stir in the tall grass
I know what I must do
My weapon is dull and forgotten
So I hone it to a fine,precise edge
Sharp and ready for battle
The trees see me first
And my words remain ellusive
I stalk them,determined and patient
A hunter in the wood
I kiss the dirt
Blending with the forest floor
When my words come out of hiding
I will capture them in poetry
Written by
Kasai
Published 19th Aug 2016
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Re. This heart hunts wild
19th Aug 2016 5:18pm
Oh my....this is exquisite! Thank you so much for breathing life into this!
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19th Aug 2016 10:33pm
Feels like nature inspires you. Or you're describing, how you inspire your will to write. Seems like a colorful way to psyche yourself up. I'm always pleased to learn new inspirational techniques. Thank-you 😃😉
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20th Aug 2016 3:04am
Re. This heart hunts wild
20th Aug 2016 2:09am
You hunt wild & brave, Joan D'Arc of these poetic fields;
I see you slashing the grasses & trees with the weapon of your desire, your yearning.
& having seen their Mistress, the words come to you,
to live joyfully in your poem
I see you slashing the grasses & trees with the weapon of your desire, your yearning.
& having seen their Mistress, the words come to you,
to live joyfully in your poem
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Re. This heart hunts wild
20th Aug 2016 8:19am
This was simply outstanding, in it's imagery n destination of thought... :)
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20th Aug 2016 8:24am
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20th Aug 2016 8:20pm
Perfect ending to a beautiful poem!
odd shade of melancholy > never thought of melancholy as a shade... it suits the word!
odd shade of melancholy > never thought of melancholy as a shade... it suits the word!
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Anonymous
21st Aug 2016 4:29am
*wow*. . .I`m speechless. . .~xo, Devlin.

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21st Aug 2016 7:18am
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Re. This heart hunts wild
24th Aug 2016 6:13am
Impressive writing. You work the natural aspects of this piece so well. That third stanzpiec s inspiring, but then again, the whole piece is amazing. I'm glad I found this piece.
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24th Aug 2016 6:59am
Thankyou so much for sharing your thoughts and kind words,I'm glad it inspired you....
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Anonymous
1st Sep 2016 4:10am
This made even me ache madly.
Harshly beautiful love.
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Harshly beautiful love.
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