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Etched in Eternity
If invoked, the love of a scribe
Will grant you everlasting life
Amaranthine words and fine rhymes
Inscribed on the pages of time
With a touch, you will know it’s true
Through whisper, a cure for your blues
Complex thinker, with thoughts, tinker
And calming caress, sooth injure
A love like a dream, what it means
A fairy-tale is what it seems
A poet’s mind, will understand
Just take a chance, and lend your hand
Open heart, allow fears depart
Passion and desire, impart
To you, I grant love, fervently
Etched in my heart, eternally
Will grant you everlasting life
Amaranthine words and fine rhymes
Inscribed on the pages of time
With a touch, you will know it’s true
Through whisper, a cure for your blues
Complex thinker, with thoughts, tinker
And calming caress, sooth injure
A love like a dream, what it means
A fairy-tale is what it seems
A poet’s mind, will understand
Just take a chance, and lend your hand
Open heart, allow fears depart
Passion and desire, impart
To you, I grant love, fervently
Etched in my heart, eternally
Published 17th Aug 2016
| Edited 9th Oct 2016
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2016 3:09am
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18th Aug 2016 3:15am
Amaranthine is definitely a popular word! It'll certainly be a recurring inclusion in my future work. Thanks for the feedback! Very much appreciated!
18th Aug 2016 3:12am
Really well written really enjoyed the way you were able to paint the picture.
18th Aug 2016 3:17am
18th Aug 2016 3:21am
'Amaranthine words and fine rhymes
Inscribed on the pages of time'
Nicely done.....
18th Aug 2016 3:24am
Thank you so much. I've been learning a lot from you all. I worked diligently on that one! The wonderful feedback makes it worth it! A million thanks, my friend!
18th Aug 2016 3:12pm
18th Aug 2016 4:23pm
Anonymous
18th Aug 2016 3:30pm
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18th Aug 2016 4:25pm
Managing the ego, or letting it go, are some of life's greatest challenges, and yield some of life's greatest rewards. Thanks for the feedback Nemo. Always interested to hear your thoughts.
