Piano

"slide your fingers  
softly over my keys  

up and down  
caress the ivories"

I absolutely love these lines! Nice write love. Very sensual. 💋

Thank you so much!

Love your wonderful comment :-)

Nice work :)

Thank you! :-)

'until my screams echo
in the soundboard
of your love '
Such beautiful music.....

Glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for your comment, you made me smile :-)

man seeks music of which he is unworthy
& woman is the instrument.
luxuriously spoken...

Thank you for your comment!

Love the word luxuriously as a description :-)

lovely Duende this is one of your best poems yet so divinely sexy ;)

love Crim

Thank you so much, dear Crim!  
 
Wow... one of my best? You just made my day :-)  
 
Love, Duende

Aaaawww, now this kinda 'music' is truly music to my ears! Bee u tee full!!

Thank you so much!

Glad you enjoyed the music :-)

Damn!. . .I need to get me a piano;). . .love the strokes, Lady Duende, and the tune *mesmerizing*. . .~xo, Devlin.

Wow, what an amazing compliment!

Thank you, Devlin... you made me smile :-)

Love, Duende

Love Tchaikovsky :-)

Thank you so much for your comment!

Now this is beautiful musical verse... made me want to go to my living room and bang on my piano keys. But at 4:30 in the morning, my neighbors will have the police banging on my door... awesome write Duende!
JJ

Thank you for your comment, much appreciated!

Banging the keys sounds great, even at 4:30 am ;-)

Everytime I read one of your poems it's amazing 😁
Great job

That's the greatest compliment you can give me :-)

Thank you so much!

Thanks so much Todski!  
 
Let me react on a few things, the rest will follow in a PM  
 
"Up and down are mental cues and really effective triggers to the human psyche" > you gave a new dimension to the up and down, I like that ;-) Same goes for your interpretion of the ivories and the blacks, I'll explain that later...  
 
"Bring to life" and "the sound of my soul" have gone through many edits, thank you for confirming the fact that I made the right decision ;-)  
 
Over all, your view made me see my poem in a new and different light, I'm gonna change the category from love to erotic (wasn't sure at the time I posted it)  
 
I truly appreciate that you took the time to break down this poem, share your views and thereby gave me a look inside your (dirty) mind ;-)

Your words certainly appeal to my musical sensibilities.  I could listen all day..........

.....well written.  Great stuff : )

Thanks again :-)  
   
Most of my work is inspired by music... that you could listen to them all day, makes me smile big time :-)

super verses - loved them

Thank you so much!

Glad to hear you loved them :-)