Critique

Inspired by  crimsin (Brenda)“Flesh and Bone”

Critique

I carefully read what she wrote
I read it for a second time
And then for a third
I began to feel it
Such beautiful lines and words
Such a raw delightful passion
A longing for enlightenment
Not quite desperation yet
It is a write of wanting
A write suggesting the missing
You just have to wait
In time it will come
You will not see it coming
You cannot make it come
One day it will arrive
Without a fanfare
No noisy parade
No tick-a-tape
You might not even notice
When it arrives
Then; all of a sudden
You’ll smile
You’ll smile the warmest
And broadest of smiles
A smile that tells you
Deep down you are finally
Content