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Re. In sync
Anonymous
8th Aug 2016 2:06am
Miss Chi,
Sounds like a near perfect compliment :-) Enjoyed!
tornado
Sounds like a near perfect compliment :-) Enjoyed!
tornado
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Re: Re. In sync
8th Aug 2016 8:32pm
A bit backhanded maybe :-). But yes, you may be right!
Thanks for commenting, tornado!
Thanks for commenting, tornado!
Anonymous
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8th Aug 2016 8:00am
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Re: Re. In sync
8th Aug 2016 8:39pm
I'm glad that I achieved to mess up the first lines with the last one :-). I'm game for all kind of interpretations.
Hm ... I'm a vegetarian. Maybe that's why I only write haiku? Let's consider that, todski28.
Btw, thank you!
Hm ... I'm a vegetarian. Maybe that's why I only write haiku? Let's consider that, todski28.
Btw, thank you!
Re. In sync
Anonymous
8th Aug 2016 9:27am
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Haha! Thank you, Dewy! Yes, you never know whether to freeze your ass off or to get your heart blistered.
Cin cin!
Cin cin!
Re. In sync
8th Aug 2016 10:02am
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8th Aug 2016 8:51pm
Re. In sync
8th Aug 2016 2:24pm
Re: Re. In sync
8th Aug 2016 8:55pm
Oh, well ... yes. I haven't been thinking that far. But now we're talking about it ...
Nice comment, Ahavati! Thank you!
Nice comment, Ahavati! Thank you!
Re. In sync
8th Aug 2016 3:49pm
Kept on wondering if "LOE" was going to turn out to be acronym for something!
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8th Aug 2016 8:56pm
Re: Re. In sync
9th Aug 2016 5:45am
If you take the first letter of each word on each line, which is capitalized, you get LOE.
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Re: Re. In sync
9th Aug 2016 12:03pm
Oh, okay, THAT I didn't try :-)! Liquid Organic Energy? Err, no, there's no further depth to the lines, I'm afraid :-).
Re. In sync
8th Aug 2016 5:44pm
Miss Chi, the contrasting messages are fascinating in this piece. The exhilaration of passion that perhaps is forbidden love hence the mess. Brava!
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Re: Re. In sync
8th Aug 2016 9:05pm
There's mostly a "fly in my haiku", I'm afraid :-). Thank you, G_W, for reading me anyway. Glad if you enjoyed!
Re. In sync
Anonymous
27th Sep 2016 1:55am
Fire and Ice does make a mess, and neither may exist in the end. Nice piece.
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Re: Re. In sync
10th May 2017 12:37pm
Thanks, mariekeys, for this great comment. You are right, might be the demise of the two elements as well as just delight :-).
Re. In sync
Anonymous
29th Aug 2017 7:55pm
Perfect - so enjoyed your poetry.
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Re: Re. In sync
29th Aug 2017 10:19pm
Your comment is very much appreciated, Balindajane. Thank you so much! I'm looking forward to reading your haikus :-).
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2nd Oct 2017 8:13pm
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Re: Re. In sync
2nd Oct 2017 10:03pm
And both, fire and ice, create the mess when you forget which of them, the heat or the cold, should be in demand, Thank you so much for your kind comment, Danny.