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MY ATLANTIS
A mask upon a mask upon a mask.
A forever Scooby Doo ending.
Rendered me into ankle deep pretend.
Tell me what I want to hear.
Lie to yourself it's what you want to say...
While she watched the cicada hatching-
I watched her cocoon...
Summer is gone...
And she's still in that shell somewhere...
A forever Scooby Doo ending.
Rendered me into ankle deep pretend.
Tell me what I want to hear.
Lie to yourself it's what you want to say...
While she watched the cicada hatching-
I watched her cocoon...
Summer is gone...
And she's still in that shell somewhere...
Published 5th Aug 2016
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6th Aug 2016 00:55am
i'm feeling it mate, good stuff. i like the scoopy doo line, clever!
6th Aug 2016 5:03am
you've discovered the sticky addiction of pretend,
the quicksand of it.
her pensive prison. fine work, & sad...
the quicksand of it.
her pensive prison. fine work, & sad...
