please come by

Few words...with great depth.  
Pieced together wonderfully.

I welcome your presence and value your appreciation from my heart. Thank You for your in depth understanding and insight!!

:-)

"for all the earth's  revolving
along  the  same  old  orbit
this problem ain't worth solving
let gravity absorb  it " < -- Wowed by these lines.

I so enjoyed peeping at your work...  :)

Thank You once again MsTara! am glad you like it and welcome your visit!!

warm regards
KDAmB
:-)

Great poem, as usual.



~anonshadow😏

Welcome dear bro Anonshadow! Thank you so much for your visit and very kind appreciation!

Cheers!
KDAmB

Hey! I love short, intense (or not) poetry.
You scored big time with this little ditty.

Cool line . . . "this problem ain't worth solving

Aww Jerry, Sir I am humbled by your visit and high praise. Thank you so so much! I am glad you found it praiseworthy! thank You once again!!

Cheers!

wow! - extremely clever and thought provoking piece - I will read this one more than a few times tonight - I feel a stirring :-)

Thank You Dave! Your feedback always brings a huge smile on my face. Always have and will appreciate it beyond words! Thank You Sir!

So who comes by when no else does?,
this is so so touching,

but then again it could me and this delicate
clothe,  I'm wrapped in this late noon.. .

-Howlings

Well who says you can't make a hole in the sky,  
 just try with all your heart,throw a stone and see....  
 
You proved this old classic couplet right!!  
Welcome MsWhelms.. appreciate your visit and such kind words.. Thank You so so much!!  
 
Cheers!

Little words big impact big thumbs up

Thanks Brother! Your support keeps my motivation going.. Always much appreciated!!

Cheers!

it's one heart calling the other, who's got too many things up her mind... too many problems to solve before taking the step...problems that actually won't be solved as they existed since the earth was formed..same shit...the obstacles between two hearts..and in this instance the other half is too confused and entangled.. so I say let the gravity(in both senses) have it- just drop everything and come..
 
now I'll whack that " why" with a thong ...bogan style if I see it again!! okay??

C'mon brah... f$%$ the sorry... was kiddin'