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Bad girl sketching rain ( co-write with JohnFeddeler )
When love drifts in
Like sweet inspiration
It rides the rain
it burns hot
with sheet lightning
and thunderous refrain
It flees, untouchable
A misty- eyed ghost
And I give chase
Sometimes in the Eye
Of the storm I see
My own face
the wrath of love is a
bold tormenting
pariah in my bed
so I drift with the wind
and I ride the rain
to bitter tears ahead
Like sweet inspiration
It rides the rain
it burns hot
with sheet lightning
and thunderous refrain
It flees, untouchable
A misty- eyed ghost
And I give chase
Sometimes in the Eye
Of the storm I see
My own face
the wrath of love is a
bold tormenting
pariah in my bed
so I drift with the wind
and I ride the rain
to bitter tears ahead
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Re. Bad girl sketching rain ( co-write with JohnFeddeler )
20th Jul 2016 9:14am
Beautiful.
someone will hold you & make the night prettier.
someone will...
someone will hold you & make the night prettier.
someone will...
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Re: Re. Bad girl sketching rain ( co-write with JohnFeddeler )
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20th Jul 2016 3:50pm
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21st Jul 2016 3:07am
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Re. Bad girl sketching rain ( co-write with JohnFeddeler )
Anonymous
20th Jul 2016 10:14pm
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Re: Re. Bad girl sketching rain ( co-write with JohnFeddeler )
21st Jul 2016 3:06am
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Feb 2023 2:45am
21st Jul 2016 7:20am
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21st Jul 2016 7:21am
Re. Bad girl sketching rain ( co-write with JohnFeddeler )
22nd Jul 2016 7:00am
Hands down, you two did a wonderful
job together. I love it, gives something
to feel.
-Howlings
job together. I love it, gives something
to feel.
-Howlings
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Re. Bad girl sketching rain ( co-write with JohnFeddeler )
22nd Jul 2016 7:17am
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
28th Apr 2019 3:01am
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