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the raid...
walked into
my head
when the door man wasn't
looking
and said
who's in charge here...
Published 20th Jul 2016
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22nd Jul 2016 1:28am
I'd kick the bouncer in the balls for not keeping a close eye on things :-)
LOL - a wee cracker :-)
LOL - a wee cracker :-)
22nd Jul 2016 1:55am
but there's some bloke behind the counter
with his fingers in the 'til
I turn up, anyway... :)
with his fingers in the 'til
I turn up, anyway... :)
