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Poetry is motion
Poetry is motion,emotion set to words and is almost fated to the musical rythym of lonsome notes
Or perhaps your secret fire burns wild behind a fury of frantic,vivid brush strokes
Beautiful words for the broken,the meek and ever passionate who have fallen and rebuilt anew so many times that it births pure necessity,built not of thoughtless habit
Compose me a haunting symphony of joy,ripped raw from my soft,warm heart
Riddle me a sweet lover's rhyme and if only for a fleeting moment shall my heart belong to thine
Paint for me the delicate curves of a woman who wears nothing but a sultry smile abover her naked heart
Beauty beheld,a masterpiece!
As in fine poetry,so doth fine art
Published 7th Jul 2016
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17th Aug 2016 10:28pm
I almost never critique anyone,
but since I am a lover of your
mental lobes,
I think this one would read better
if you shape it up a bit for
more impact.. Im not sure but
it still a beautiful piece of poetry
in motion..
-Howlings
but since I am a lover of your
mental lobes,
I think this one would read better
if you shape it up a bit for
more impact.. Im not sure but
it still a beautiful piece of poetry
in motion..
-Howlings
17th Aug 2016 10:31pm
Always love good advice,thankyou for that! Alot of my older stuff could use a little shaping,I think. Your critiqe is appreciated!
