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-remember the rain
lest we forget our way once again
don't be afraid to laugh with the thunder
and remember how the rain
always gave us a new reason to dance
tempting lightning to deliver its sunder...
-ed
don't be afraid to laugh with the thunder
and remember how the rain
always gave us a new reason to dance
tempting lightning to deliver its sunder...
-ed
Published 1st Jul 2016
| Edited 4th May 2022
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1st Jul 2016 9:35pm
1st Jul 2016 10:28pm
Because it's filled with everything my heart has to offer... that's why... :)
Thanks for the read and kind words... :)
Thanks for the read and kind words... :)
2nd Jul 2016 1:26am
Ahh, so that's the reason. Must be a beautiful heart you have there. Thank you for sharing ☺
2nd Jul 2016 1:27am
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1st Jul 2016 10:55pm
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1st Jul 2016 11:30pm
1st Jul 2016 11:32pm
2nd Jul 2016 00:29am
2nd Jul 2016 00:43am
Depends on who you talk to some days, my friend... :)
However, I really appreciate your kind words once again... Thanks...
However, I really appreciate your kind words once again... Thanks...
2nd Jul 2016 3:05am
it's always more poetic in the rain, even, or especially, dancing.
great piece...
great piece...
2nd Jul 2016 6:48am
2nd Jul 2016 12:54pm
Two hearts should always know where to meet in nature if inadvertently separated by the world.
2nd Jul 2016 4:28pm
Epic comment, my friend... Thank you so much for reading and the kind words. In this case, I hope one of those hearts can get over the other one being incredibly stupid...
6th Jul 2016 8:46am
Love the rain.....love this poem.It's simple,yet not.The title doesn't do it any justice,but I'm ashamed to admit that it made me more than a little curiouse.Well done.
