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So precious
The way you screw up sometimes
In a letter,
and you scribble out an important word
It's
the way you improve on a previous statement
and leave me hanging
This is in no way close to home
this will in no way coexist
but please,
for my eyes,
correct a word
and gently persist
with what you needed to say
I value your word
your world
and it's important to me
to hear it right the first time
I've been holding on
like a one person show,
like a delicate crazy person,
able to crumble like stone
frozen for words
I mumble and moan
out of focus
In a letter,
and you scribble out an important word
It's
the way you improve on a previous statement
and leave me hanging
This is in no way close to home
this will in no way coexist
but please,
for my eyes,
correct a word
and gently persist
with what you needed to say
I value your word
your world
and it's important to me
to hear it right the first time
I've been holding on
like a one person show,
like a delicate crazy person,
able to crumble like stone
frozen for words
I mumble and moan
out of focus
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