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There is a part of me
That makes me want to
Dance naked in the street
It’s the very part of me
That makes me want to
Dance naked in the street
That would cause me to
Get arrested, jailed
Probably ending up on a register
And all because
I felt the need to dance
So much for freedom
That makes me want to
Dance naked in the street
It’s the very part of me
That makes me want to
Dance naked in the street
That would cause me to
Get arrested, jailed
Probably ending up on a register
And all because
I felt the need to dance
So much for freedom
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29th Jun 2016 2:15am
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2nd Jul 2016 5:31pm
yep, you are only as free as the man allows you to be :-(
Thanks for reading and commenting :-)
Thanks for reading and commenting :-)
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29th Jun 2016 2:55am
David such a beautiful thought..
I can see you now dancing naked :)
love you..
Brenda
I can see you now dancing naked :)
love you..
Brenda
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2nd Jul 2016 5:32pm
you'll probably need extra therapy with that vision in your head (lol)
sending ehugs :-)
sending ehugs :-)
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Anonymous
29th Jun 2016 7:40am
just need the right place to do it :)
excellent write, David
excellent write, David
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2nd Jul 2016 5:33pm
all about the right place and the right time (lol)
glad you enjoyed this wee piece of nonsense :-)
glad you enjoyed this wee piece of nonsense :-)
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29th Jun 2016 9:14am
Can feel the emotion through this ink Dave! Yes freedom is priceless but fear of arrest has it's own thrills even though you're ownly expressing your joy at freedom in you own unrestrained way! beaut ink indeed!
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2nd Jul 2016 5:35pm
foe every funny poem there is a serious undertone of a message :-(
thank you I am glad you enjoyed it :-)
thank you I am glad you enjoyed it :-)
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29th Jun 2016 1:30pm
Had visions of you bare chested wearing a kilt which suddenly falls to the ground..OMG, he's naked underneath ;-)
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2nd Jul 2016 5:36pm
LMAO,.......... I am a traditional highlander - always naked under the kilt :-)
be kind when you're explaining this vision to your therapist :-)
be kind when you're explaining this vision to your therapist :-)
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3rd Jul 2016 5:01am
Funny as David...you know I've been thinking and yes, that in itself is dangerous ;-) ...
I wear a lot of long dresses per se and I'm thinking why do we wear underpants underneath...how easy it would be just to lift the dress and do what needs to be done... ;-)
I wear a lot of long dresses per se and I'm thinking why do we wear underpants underneath...how easy it would be just to lift the dress and do what needs to be done... ;-)
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Anonymous
29th Jun 2016 10:46pm
LMAO!!! I thought wow.....express yourself.....be free......then I got to the ending and am still laughing.......thanks David......you never fail to crying a smile to me......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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