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Anonymous
18th Jun 2016 8:18pm
makes me wonder...was someone hoping for an apple
or is the protagonist projecting...?
thoroughly enjoyed this, delightful piece.
or is the protagonist projecting...?
thoroughly enjoyed this, delightful piece.
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Re: Re. one tries...
18th Jun 2016 10:52pm
I tend to mentally set the scene
in which the words are played
out, but then sometimes the words
make their own alterations...
thanks... :)
in which the words are played
out, but then sometimes the words
make their own alterations...
thanks... :)
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18th Jun 2016 11:28pm
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