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True
It will take
more then gifts
what ever they may be
it will take
more then the words
the ones you rehearse
before you come
visit me
it will take
more
then the strokes
you give
for my pleasure
that rests
deep within my mind
that still waits
for the spark
that true touch
from your heart
more then gifts
what ever they may be
it will take
more then the words
the ones you rehearse
before you come
visit me
it will take
more
then the strokes
you give
for my pleasure
that rests
deep within my mind
that still waits
for the spark
that true touch
from your heart
Published 16th Jun 2016
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Anonymous
16th Jun 2016 8:23pm
An intense write tha alludes to the possibility of deep passion.
I enjoyed this read, thanks
Slight critique, where you've used then, it should be than.
Minor issue in a lovely piece. :)
I enjoyed this read, thanks
Slight critique, where you've used then, it should be than.
Minor issue in a lovely piece. :)
18th Jun 2016 3:19pm
