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Anima Mundi
The very day of my birth
has become pointless to me,
I take a look at myself,
and I seem so confused,
what's the right way and
what should I even do?
Surrounded by my failures,
I can hear hell &
the demons are screaming
for the slow day of my death,
but no, not yet,
there is more to endure,
but it seems no chance to be pure,
will my words make a difference,
or is this life sentence
a simple waste of attendance?
Simply put, just take a look in my heart
and you'll see what tears my soul apart
has become pointless to me,
I take a look at myself,
and I seem so confused,
what's the right way and
what should I even do?
Surrounded by my failures,
I can hear hell &
the demons are screaming
for the slow day of my death,
but no, not yet,
there is more to endure,
but it seems no chance to be pure,
will my words make a difference,
or is this life sentence
a simple waste of attendance?
Simply put, just take a look in my heart
and you'll see what tears my soul apart
Published 12th Jun 2016
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2016 11:39pm
Does anyone even care? I wonder that sometimes.
13th Jun 2016 00:50am
Yup, I think most of the time they portray they do because it's what is expected. But when you know someone genuinely cares it's a blessing
13th Jun 2016 3:08am
Here we are a big family and we will take care of each other if you need a friend come talk to me
Great write
Great write
13th Jun 2016 4:19am
13th Jun 2016 4:23am
13th Jun 2016 6:34am
Wow. What you wrote here, it hit me like a freight train! As I was reading it I felt my mind reeling back, trying to stop me from reading it. Feeling worthless, no future, no meaning to what I am, what I do, what I say.
It was the line "surrounded by my failures" and the confusion leading up to it of what am I supposed to do now. This line bought a tear to my eye, truly, because I know this desperate feeling, feeling like a waste of space, feeling like I was never meant to be here as I watch everyone around me succeed, here I sit hiding behind words.
Wow what a powerful write, just wow.
Jesse xo
It was the line "surrounded by my failures" and the confusion leading up to it of what am I supposed to do now. This line bought a tear to my eye, truly, because I know this desperate feeling, feeling like a waste of space, feeling like I was never meant to be here as I watch everyone around me succeed, here I sit hiding behind words.
Wow what a powerful write, just wow.
Jesse xo
