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Dying Inside
D isturbed, disrupted, no end in sight
Y our pain and misery, no will to fight
I nside your heart, inside your mind
N o one will see, and accept your kind
G iving up hope, true love was blind
I n time they will learn, to look but never listen
N o one ever thought, your memory would glisten
S o many years, spent lost in your mind
I f only you awoke, to the stars aligned
D eath is imminent, but yet to be seen
E vil succumbed, to escape all you’ve been
Y our pain and misery, no will to fight
I nside your heart, inside your mind
N o one will see, and accept your kind
G iving up hope, true love was blind
I n time they will learn, to look but never listen
N o one ever thought, your memory would glisten
S o many years, spent lost in your mind
I f only you awoke, to the stars aligned
D eath is imminent, but yet to be seen
E vil succumbed, to escape all you’ve been
Published 16th Jul 2011
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16th Jul 2011 5:47pm
...fan of rhyme or acrostics, mainly because I think they can shackle the writer & deflect from the real poet expressing themselves - a bit like writing with handcuffs on.
That said, I can tell you've put a lot of effort into producing this, so full marks from me for commitment. Keep'em coming.
Best ~ Abra
That said, I can tell you've put a lot of effort into producing this, so full marks from me for commitment. Keep'em coming.
Best ~ Abra
17th Jul 2011 1:53am
I love acrostic poems. They take a lot of talent, and you did a really good job with this one. Good luck in the future. (: -Maggie.
26th Apr 2012 6:30am
On I like rhyming poems. But I don't pull it off so well,you did though. Very well done
