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N' Anotha 1 Mights da Truss*
'The Shelter' reinforced...
once more
3 ways led...opened door...
'Fore scored, the song wailed
raise the chalice, for the re-impaled
Darkness settles in, nestled...
lain within deep cold blanket
Culled the sound, fall silent
left only the echoes to thank it...
A curse to angels' false trust
just anotha might- incites the Truss...*
*Truss-verb (used with object)
to tie or secure (the body) closely or tightly; bind (often followed by up ).
Published 9th Jun 2016
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9th Jun 2016 6:36am
9th Jun 2016 11:11am
9th Jun 2016 12:13pm
You've a way of expression like I've never seen before. It's truly beautiful. I love your use of the word truss. ☺
Willow
Willow
9th Jun 2016 1:53pm
Aaaawwww thank you, I'm so deeply flattered... U have me blushin :)
Truly appreciate your support :)
Truly appreciate your support :)
Anonymous
10th Jun 2016 1:22am
this speaks of a dark and moody type romance....like the words are stalking your intended....
An eloquent spill indeed bro
An eloquent spill indeed bro
10th Jun 2016 5:21am
U naile it bro. That's exactly what it is... Thanks a ton for your support n your keen eye :)
10th Jun 2016 12:25pm
10th Jun 2016 1:48pm
Anonymous
10th Jun 2016 7:32pm
PM! Melancholy filled me as I read this...
" 'Fore scored, the song wailed
raise the chalice, for the re-impaled
Darkness settles in, nestled...
lain within deep cold blanket"
~ a poignant write
With love - Taryn xoxo
" 'Fore scored, the song wailed
raise the chalice, for the re-impaled
Darkness settles in, nestled...
lain within deep cold blanket"
~ a poignant write
With love - Taryn xoxo
10th Jun 2016 8:51pm
Thank you my sweetness I appreciate your time n thoughts, n grateful for all your support :)
10th Jun 2016 10:35pm
I see you still have a way of stringing words together creating beautiful pieces.... ...and I read on....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
10th Jun 2016 10:39pm
There's no way I can stop as long as God is usin me... :) but I do thank u so much my smoovness! :)
Anonymous
12th Jun 2016 6:55pm
Can always feel the desires of your
loins and heart ;)
Loving the entity poured..
loins and heart ;)
Loving the entity poured..
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2016 11:18pm
You are the master of word pon-de-play..not to mention short, sexy and perfectly composed.
I used to see the word truss in...akhm culinary dept. lol but now i will not think of it the same way again :)
I used to see the word truss in...akhm culinary dept. lol but now i will not think of it the same way again :)
12th Jun 2016 11:55pm
Aaawwwww you're the best my sweetheart! Thank you so very much
I'm humbled n forever grateful :)
I'm humbled n forever grateful :)
