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DISGUISE: (RIP)
At noon tides high
She sat upon tressels;
with a tear and a sigh
Taking in the sights around
Ignoring all the busy sounds
Feelings fled from pains inside
Waiting for only time to abide
Onlookers unseen
Passing of life to eternal dream.
14 July 2011
AnnabelleRHC
She sat upon tressels;
with a tear and a sigh
Taking in the sights around
Ignoring all the busy sounds
Feelings fled from pains inside
Waiting for only time to abide
Onlookers unseen
Passing of life to eternal dream.
14 July 2011
AnnabelleRHC
Published 14th Jul 2011
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16th Jul 2011 4:42am
18th Jul 2011 4:41am
I think that is a good idea to write another one with a more detailed graffic nature too it maybe this was on the soft side for memories sake , but I do quite like that idea.
25th Aug 2011 00:34am
I added to this one after a short time had passed but it ended up more of a story form than a poem form
9th Sep 2011 1:41am
good stuff here Annabelle.
short but bursting with personality, not sure i can connect the poem to the title yet bit it will come to me when i least expect it.
fair play!
short but bursting with personality, not sure i can connect the poem to the title yet bit it will come to me when i least expect it.
fair play!
10th Sep 2011 8:01am
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