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A Peculiar Pain
The ache
The pain
The turmoil
I hate this
I cannot endure it anymore
Excruciating
I wish to rip it out
How I let a stranger
Trick me into such grief
To turn back time
Start again
Lead not myself into this
Tell him no
I don’t want this
It’s too much to bear
I’ll never be myself again
All I can think of is the ache
It won’t let me sleep
It won’t let me eat
It is a plague inside me
Reached into my mind
And now it is all I can think about
I cannot wait for it to end
So I can return to sanity
Rid myself of the horror
And live my life without agony
God I hate braces
The pain
The turmoil
I hate this
I cannot endure it anymore
Excruciating
I wish to rip it out
How I let a stranger
Trick me into such grief
To turn back time
Start again
Lead not myself into this
Tell him no
I don’t want this
It’s too much to bear
I’ll never be myself again
All I can think of is the ache
It won’t let me sleep
It won’t let me eat
It is a plague inside me
Reached into my mind
And now it is all I can think about
I cannot wait for it to end
So I can return to sanity
Rid myself of the horror
And live my life without agony
God I hate braces
Published 14th Jul 2011
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4th Jun 2012 5:03pm
I'm sorry if this is taken the wrong way that's funny i could have sworn this poem was about a bad relationship and guilt and heartbreak from it, but to my surprise it wasn't. That was a great twist! Keep writing things like this. It throws off the audience. Good Job!!
5th Jun 2012 3:49pm
Haha thank you it was intended to sound like that to remind the people of dup that heartbreak isnt the only pain around lol
