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MINE
I want you
I want you to be mine
I want to taste your lips
I want to hug you right
I want you to be naked
I want to make love to you now
I want to hear you scream my name
That you will forget other girls you had
I want to hear your breath, moan and groan
I want to feel every shiver and shake
I want you
I want you to be mine
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Published 28th May 2016
| Edited 2nd Jun 2016
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Anonymous
28th May 2016 7:15pm
I want you to scream for the first time
How about... 'I want to hear you scream my name'
How about... 'I want to hear you scream my name'
29th May 2016 5:15am
Anonymous
- Edited 31st May 2016 11:41pm
29th May 2016 9:17am
I like the simplicity of this work Dhenz. It is bare, direct, stark in its nature; calling out to the one whose love you desire.
29th May 2016 3:37pm
