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Little Stars
The stars , from here
look so little
we live , in fear
we are so brittle
each breath , so near
and unpredictable
our quest , unclear
were blind and gullable .
I wish I could grow into a sun
ignite dark skies
for everyone
I think it's like
being a woman
to give life , to shine light
it's mighty powerful .
I watch my three babies
sleep at night
these are
my stars
they are my bright
their life so far
from here tonight
my sight , solar
they make me fight . [/font]
look so little
we live , in fear
we are so brittle
each breath , so near
and unpredictable
our quest , unclear
were blind and gullable .
I wish I could grow into a sun
ignite dark skies
for everyone
I think it's like
being a woman
to give life , to shine light
it's mighty powerful .
I watch my three babies
sleep at night
these are
my stars
they are my bright
their life so far
from here tonight
my sight , solar
they make me fight . [/font]
Published 12th Jul 2011
| Edited 17th Jul 2011
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13th Jul 2011 10:44pm
Beautifully pleasing in all of its
poetic soul and creative gesture.
Though the punctuation is a bit off.
poetic soul and creative gesture.
Though the punctuation is a bit off.
17th Jul 2011 3:45pm
ha ha ha yeah I don't know what happened with my punctuation there ha ha it isn't usually that much of a mess
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28th Nov 2011 3:58am
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