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See this Feel this Do this
This vision functioned as a mechanism
It telephones a place in life
Before masculinity was a standard, issue or a status to attain
When naivety was understood and aided with knowledge to gain
Before superficial need of vacant sex partners on the brain would remain
A man
Drew breath through puckered lips
I, also a man was moved as a child in this moment
He blew bubbles
This vision provoked profound awakening
Reviving the believer of immeasurable possibilities within
Ignorant of self-hate taught through ideology regarding sin
Unaware of pessimism and its ability to transmit infection to hope
Unsuspecting of the relation he bears to death at the knotting of a rope
Understanding of the unity and the separation of happiness and sorrow
While maintaining the warmest of expectations of tomorrow
Boy and man alike shall do this
Published 18th May 2016
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19th May 2016 3:38am
I've now read this 4 times and I expect it will likely be drawn to read it again. Very strong expression ☺
7th Jun 2016 8:38pm
I thank you for the time and care you took to read this. Please let me know if you'd like more insight. I had a beautiful time writing this.
Thank you dear one!!
Thank you dear one!!
19th May 2016 1:48pm
It took me thrice
Just to understand
Still I think id read it 3 more times.
Just to understand
Still I think id read it 3 more times.
7th Jun 2016 8:40pm
