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You Don’t Often Hear That
She said “no darling, let me pay for this”
‘I heard that’
She said “no sweetie let me get that for you”
‘I heard that’
She said “it’s ok, I’ll let you choose”
‘I heard that’
She said “when do you want me to make dinner”
‘I heard that’
She said “let me polish your shoes for you”
‘I heard that’
She said “would you like to have a oiled massage”
‘I heard that’
She said “Please let me run you a warm soothing bath”
‘I heard that’
She said “I’ve just realised how handsome you are”
‘I heard that’
She said “you really are one in a million”
‘I heard that’
She said “I love you”
Now you don’t often hear that
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Re. You Don’t Often Hear That
15th May 2016 7:46pm
Man your writs of wits...never fail to prick my bubble of silence which always results in an explosion of (hyena) laughs! You deliver some darn serious stuff with such humor it never fails to amaze me. Thanks for sharing with us this amazing piece.
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
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Re: Re. You Don’t Often Hear That
16th May 2016 11:00pm
you are way to kind - but thank you just the same - I am just glad that you enjoy them
:-)
:-)
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15th May 2016 7:55pm
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16th May 2016 11:04pm
Re. You Don’t Often Hear That
15th May 2016 8:58pm
I don't know where you find 'em David but I ain't never heard nunna dat....
but then I live in a fantasy world where I'm happy living alone.
JJ
but then I live in a fantasy world where I'm happy living alone.
JJ
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Re: Re. You Don’t Often Hear That
16th May 2016 11:01pm
that's strange cause I also live in a fantasy world where women find me irresistible :-)
Re: Re. You Don’t Often Hear That
17th May 2016 00:57am
Are there any houses available in your fantasy world? I'm gonna put mine up for sale!
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Re. You Don’t Often Hear That
15th May 2016 9:30pm
You lucky so and so. Would write more but wife wants a massage after i do the dishes
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Re: Re. You Don’t Often Hear That
16th May 2016 11:03pm
this one was a bit fanciful (lol)
thank you for reading and commenting :-)
thank you for reading and commenting :-)
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Anonymous
17th May 2016 2:48am
Hey David......Some acts of luv......are sweet when done.....others are sweet when heard.....like this a lot.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. You Don’t Often Hear That
19th May 2016 00:16am
thank you so much for reading and understanding :-)
warm smiles and e-hugs on their way :-)
warm smiles and e-hugs on their way :-)