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Broken
How do you fix someone that's been shattered one to many times,
her pieces scattered across the pages, blood seeping through the binds, Crumpling away like the old pavement, hit by one to many rain storms,
Plus who would waste the glue,
knowing she can never be whole,
she's easier to replace,
then to help fill in her tattered soul,
how foolish is she to believe....
someone could ever love the incomplete...
her pieces scattered across the pages, blood seeping through the binds, Crumpling away like the old pavement, hit by one to many rain storms,
Plus who would waste the glue,
knowing she can never be whole,
she's easier to replace,
then to help fill in her tattered soul,
how foolish is she to believe....
someone could ever love the incomplete...
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Re. Broken
11th May 2016 3:53am
2 incompletes can make more that a whole....I would gladly put you back together & give a little of me to fill in any blank spaces...careful they may be itchy,,,lolol
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11th May 2016 5:26pm
Re: Re. Broken
11th May 2016 5:40pm
yes...I have been broken & had no one to help me...so yes I would be there for you...because I would never want someone to go through what I did...
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12th May 2016 00:41am
Re. Broken
11th Jun 2016 10:09am
You help her to help herself realise that her aspirations are not foolish and her poetry is good
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3rd Jul 2016 5:57pm
Re. Broken
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- Edited 29th Aug 2016 4:23am
29th Aug 2016 4:10am
I really like this...it's a good question to ask, if you find the answer let me know.
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Re: Re. Broken
18th Sep 2018 11:54am
I have yet to find the answer but I no longer am searching for it either.
Re: Re. Broken
18th Sep 2018 11:54am
I have yet to find the answer but I no longer am searching for it either.