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Mother, Priceless...
A mother... so precious to a life
A mother, truly pivotal for life
I can just about see... Fallin' back
to a place she used to be...
dreams ran rapid, the gamut,
of possibilities...
the inevitability, boulders of hard
reality, bashin' thru her window
of dreams...
yet, in the face of it...
she planted substance where it
fit, n' showered her whole in it...
no matter...what was needed
no matter, whatever the ails
she'd knead it, treat it with
the sweetest kisses of love...
A mother...greatest blessin'
of all time
A mother, priceless...
and I'm grateful
God chose her to be mine...
A mother, truly pivotal for life
I can just about see... Fallin' back
to a place she used to be...
dreams ran rapid, the gamut,
of possibilities...
the inevitability, boulders of hard
reality, bashin' thru her window
of dreams...
yet, in the face of it...
she planted substance where it
fit, n' showered her whole in it...
no matter...what was needed
no matter, whatever the ails
she'd knead it, treat it with
the sweetest kisses of love...
A mother...greatest blessin'
of all time
A mother, priceless...
and I'm grateful
God chose her to be mine...
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Re. Mother, Priceless...
8th May 2016 1:13pm
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8th May 2016 1:46pm
Thank you Crim, N yea I hate to brag
but she's pretty damn awesome lol
Appreciate you lady, n happy Mother's Day to u :)
but she's pretty damn awesome lol
Appreciate you lady, n happy Mother's Day to u :)
Re. Mother, Priceless...
8th May 2016 2:21pm
Aw, this is so beautiful. My mother was so young(20) when she had my older brother(turning 21) so especially the first verses hit me. She always says that I should enjoy my 20s as a young single woman should, travel, explore, etc...things she didn't have the chance to do because she chose to be a mother to us. I plan to experience the things she said with her. She's more like a sister to me. :)
Dammit, Poetikmind, your making me tear up, haha! Thank you for these words...Couldn't have said them better.
Dammit, Poetikmind, your making me tear up, haha! Thank you for these words...Couldn't have said them better.
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Re: Re. Mother, Priceless...
8th May 2016 2:59pm
Aaaaawwww my sweet beauty, I'm grateful for your words n your support always, n yea enjoy your youth becuz it's gone before you know it!
Re: Re. Mother, Priceless...
8th May 2016 4:15pm
Sorry I forgot to say earlier,
Happy mother's day to your mom! *hugs* :)
Happy mother's day to your mom! *hugs* :)
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Re: Re. Mother, Priceless...
9th May 2016 00:18am
Re. Mother, Priceless...
8th May 2016 4:23pm
Such a sensitive and touching write. Happy Mother's Day to your mama :-)
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Anonymous
8th May 2016 8:15pm
PM!!!! A most beautiful dedication to your Mother and I am sure she would be brought to tears if she were to read it....Wonderful!
With love - Taryn xoxo
With love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. Mother, Priceless...
9th May 2016 00:26am
Thank you my sweet Taryn, Yea my mommy
already has a copy, n I know she's happy about it :) appreciate ur sweet words so much :)
already has a copy, n I know she's happy about it :) appreciate ur sweet words so much :)
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9th May 2016 2:45am
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9th May 2016 8:34am
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9th May 2016 11:51pm
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10th May 2016 1:17am
Re. Mother, Priceless...
10th May 2016 4:57pm
(((Clap-clap-clap))) nicely said and done, Yo Momma...should very proud of you indeed lol
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Red
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Re: Re. Mother, Priceless...
10th May 2016 7:25pm
Thank u Red, yea she might be a lil... lol I appreciate you support always
n I hope ur day was great. :)
n I hope ur day was great. :)
Re. Mother, Priceless...
Anonymous
11th May 2016 00:18am
God chose her to be mine, that's sweet.
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11th May 2016 00:24am
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Anonymous
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11th May 2016 1:38am
You may be interested to know that I too have written a poem on this theme. "Mother" is the title & you'll find it in my poem collection.
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Re. Mother, Priceless...
11th May 2016 11:18am
Re: Re. Mother, Priceless...
11th May 2016 1:58pm
IF it made it to her, I'm sure she did
but that's becuz she's that kinda mommy :) thank you sweetie, nice seeing u on my page again :)
but that's becuz she's that kinda mommy :) thank you sweetie, nice seeing u on my page again :)
Re. Mother, Priceless...
13th May 2016 4:38am
this was truly Beautiful!!
fav lines:
"no matter...what was needed
no matter, whatever the ails
she'd knead it, treat it with
the sweetest kisses of love.." that part so endearing ..Lovely!!!
fav lines:
"no matter...what was needed
no matter, whatever the ails
she'd knead it, treat it with
the sweetest kisses of love.." that part so endearing ..Lovely!!!
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Re: Re. Mother, Priceless...
13th May 2016 8:36am
Thank you my dear PD, truly sweet of you to say n I'm honored! :) appreciate your support always :)
Re. Mother, Priceless...
13th May 2016 9:42pm
aww.... this is truly 'priceless'. From a mother that feels special in this very moment from reading this ink, I say, thank you Rich!
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Re: Re. Mother, Priceless...
13th May 2016 10:20pm
Aaawwww well you're most welcome my sweet 'Reign' :) appreciate you much :)
Re. Mother, Priceless...
Anonymous
17th May 2016 6:13am
A beautiful dedication babe,
I love this
It gives me a soft and kind
feeling of appreciation. A
sweet thought that exists in
this world.
I love this
It gives me a soft and kind
feeling of appreciation. A
sweet thought that exists in
this world.
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Re: Re. Mother, Priceless...
17th May 2016 2:41pm
Aaaawwww thank you! I'm happy it had that affect on you and I'm ever grateful for your continued support my dear :)