deepundergroundpoetry.com
I like bad guys with cold heart whose soul is lost
I like your dark soulless eyes,
your eyes that speaks violence in your mind,
that sees nothing but monochromatic colors,
and that doesn't show fragile emotions.
You're the worst kind of hurricane,
yet I love to endure
even after the long run,
just so I could make you stay.
I like your soft pale lips,
your lips that merely speaks honesty,
that knows how to deceive a naive soul
and that creates beauty in every single lie.
You're a complete wreck,
yet I find you alluring
and inviting.
I find beauty in all of your flaws.
I like your cold rough hands,
your hands that molded sweet little daisies into fierce red roses with thorns,
that have touched thousands of flowers and left them withered,
and that destroys everything that it touch.
You're a disaster,
my favorite kind of disaster,
the kind that I would like to experience
and would gratify even after all the damages and casualties.
Destroy me.
Let me experience your range.
And make me see
why storms are being named.
your eyes that speaks violence in your mind,
that sees nothing but monochromatic colors,
and that doesn't show fragile emotions.
You're the worst kind of hurricane,
yet I love to endure
even after the long run,
just so I could make you stay.
I like your soft pale lips,
your lips that merely speaks honesty,
that knows how to deceive a naive soul
and that creates beauty in every single lie.
You're a complete wreck,
yet I find you alluring
and inviting.
I find beauty in all of your flaws.
I like your cold rough hands,
your hands that molded sweet little daisies into fierce red roses with thorns,
that have touched thousands of flowers and left them withered,
and that destroys everything that it touch.
You're a disaster,
my favorite kind of disaster,
the kind that I would like to experience
and would gratify even after all the damages and casualties.
Destroy me.
Let me experience your range.
And make me see
why storms are being named.
Published 6th May 2016
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 0
comments 8
reads 599
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
6th May 2016 10:03pm
And sometimes, you just have to have what makes you happy.
"Everything that's good to you ain't good for you" may be a true statement, but it makes for a miserable life.
Thank You for an energetic read
"Everything that's good to you ain't good for you" may be a true statement, but it makes for a miserable life.
Thank You for an energetic read
8th May 2016 9:41pm
Well, you know some people are, they like it bad, and I guess I am one of them. Thank you also for lending my poem your precious time. :)
7th May 2016 8:37am
8th May 2016 9:42pm
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
7th May 2016 8:04pm
<< post removed >>
8th May 2016 9:44pm
Wow! Thank you! I can't find the right words describe my feelings about what you said. I just simply want to thank you and also, just wanna let you know that it made me more inspired in continuing my passion.
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2016 11:03pm
8th May 2016 10:32pm
Great poem, expertly written, expressing the feelings you are going through in this relationship on the page, perfectly well.
I think you like the challenge. You probably want to see if you can tame the hurricane & eventually change the man. Someone without flaws is no challenge after all.
I think you like the challenge. You probably want to see if you can tame the hurricane & eventually change the man. Someone without flaws is no challenge after all.
9th May 2016 4:58pm
and honestly, I am attracted to a mess 'cos I am also a mess. I don't think I deserve something way too good. hahahaha. And yes I am after the challenge. Thank you for the appreciation :D
