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A Change of Ways
She just woke up,
And had a stroke.
Still wet, feeling a little whorey
Ready for his morning glory.
To enter and resume
Last night's pleasure and put out the fume
Yesterday was a first,
And started to quench her thirst.
But baby still has more,
He has no idea what's in store.
She's ready once again,
Though last night she lain,
With a stranger from the States,
Doing exactly as she dictates.
He was hot and always able
Pleasing her without a quibble
He was the first in many ways
Now she's hooked, she's changed her ways.
And had a stroke.
Still wet, feeling a little whorey
Ready for his morning glory.
To enter and resume
Last night's pleasure and put out the fume
Yesterday was a first,
And started to quench her thirst.
But baby still has more,
He has no idea what's in store.
She's ready once again,
Though last night she lain,
With a stranger from the States,
Doing exactly as she dictates.
He was hot and always able
Pleasing her without a quibble
He was the first in many ways
Now she's hooked, she's changed her ways.
Written by
Too_hot69
(BelindaSnow)
Published 1st May 2016
| Edited 2nd May 2016
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Re. A Change of Ways
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd May 2016 00:45am
22nd May 2016 00:41am
So, you are hoping to keep hold of the guy from the states then? ;-)
P.S: I wrote a poem about the prospect of meeting a would-be-lover from the states myself, titled, "Southern States" & also a follow up to that, called, "4888 Miles" which is about the reality of it all. :-(
P.S: I wrote a poem about the prospect of meeting a would-be-lover from the states myself, titled, "Southern States" & also a follow up to that, called, "4888 Miles" which is about the reality of it all. :-(
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22nd May 2016 8:38pm
Thanks for the read.
Are your poems on this site? I'll check them out. The reality of...? Long distance relationships? I don't think that's what this poem was about. He just inspired me to write this, it's not my usual style although since I don't write regularly I'm not even sure I have a usual style.
I have an idea for the theme for a new piece but need some further inspiration, so waiting on that, but it won't be erotica.
Are your poems on this site? I'll check them out. The reality of...? Long distance relationships? I don't think that's what this poem was about. He just inspired me to write this, it's not my usual style although since I don't write regularly I'm not even sure I have a usual style.
I have an idea for the theme for a new piece but need some further inspiration, so waiting on that, but it won't be erotica.
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Anonymous
- Edited 28th May 2016 5:40am
28th May 2016 5:36am
Well, you do mention laying with a guy from the states. I took that to mean the USA, hence long distance relationships, but as you say, he was a guy who inspired you. I'm pleased to hear that we are somehow bringing out the 'poet' in you on DUP. That's natural I think. Yes, the above mentioned poems of mine about my babes from the states are on my page...you just gotta search 'em out. I would not have written half the material I have if it wasn't for friends I made on this site.;-)
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Re. A Change of Ways
26th May 2016 9:50am
You can probably figure out which Santana song I am referencing when I say the last line reminded me of the group.
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26th May 2016 11:13am
No, actually I don't. I'm not familiar with the music but I'll do some digging around.
Thanks for the read.
Thanks for the read.
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12th Jun 2016 11:35pm