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Will You Come With Me
Will you stay with me forever in this land of hell
To share the pain trickling down into this insidious well
The water burns through skin and leaves behind the remains of a decomposed smell
Forever lingering on the edge of sanity is where my thoughts dwell
I am a hardened man and yet I’ve been casted into the molds of a fragile shell
And here lies the cries of my heart ripped apart from the light and into darkness from which I fell
To share the pain trickling down into this insidious well
The water burns through skin and leaves behind the remains of a decomposed smell
Forever lingering on the edge of sanity is where my thoughts dwell
I am a hardened man and yet I’ve been casted into the molds of a fragile shell
And here lies the cries of my heart ripped apart from the light and into darkness from which I fell
Published 27th Apr 2016
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27th Apr 2016 5:05am
28th Apr 2016 8:26am
WOW..talk about dark and smooth..great first contribution stopped by to check out your piece in kind and love it dude!...flows effortless as jenny said..and great word choice...
"I'm a hardened man and yet I've been cast into the moldings of a fragile shell." absolutely poetic brilliance..transcendent thinking as a writer..love the whole piece but that line really just jumped out at me..peace new friend...keep writing...
Michael
"I'm a hardened man and yet I've been cast into the moldings of a fragile shell." absolutely poetic brilliance..transcendent thinking as a writer..love the whole piece but that line really just jumped out at me..peace new friend...keep writing...
Michael
28th Apr 2016 3:31pm
Even.in darkness you found a counterpart.
We each do, wherever we are. I feel you.
Welcome to.Dup
We each do, wherever we are. I feel you.
Welcome to.Dup
29th Apr 2016 6:58pm
30th Apr 2016 3:43am
I like the flow of the poem very much. It's short and to the point. Welcome to DUP.
